WHAT DID I JUST READ. Report Review
that was horrible!
I haven't a clue about anything that went on there.
that didn't make any sense to me...
sorry Report Review
lol funny Report Review
I really love the idea of Harry/Oliver and the on the quidditch team. Personally I think it moved kind of fast and it might have been better if Ron wasn't there (he just didn't seem to fit). It you made it a short story and developed the plot a bit more it could have real potential. I wish I saw more Harry/Oliver, it really is an interesting match.
-Caitlin Report Review
Best Story yet! Honestly!
PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE STORIES LIKE THIS ONE! Report Review
I liked it!! I never thought of Harry and Ron as being gay... oh and i read some of the other reviews... dont mind them. I personal loved it!! heheheh...em have nothing more to say. Just that i hope you keep writing whatever comes into mind, because that is what makes you different than every else. :)
~hlj~ Report Review
awww, cute, very slashy! Report Review
nice! needs to be more descriptive. Report Review
I liked it but next time be more descriptive with positions. I couldn't tell if they were standing, laying on top of each other, having sex or just having a circle jerk. Good story write more. Report Review
that is and forever will be one of my favorite stories! Report Review
I like slash, but honestly, this sucked. Horribly.Author's Response: umm..thanks?
You're sick! A relationship is a sacred bond between a boy and a girl, and you have soiled it. Soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it. Sweet story dude. Yeah, that's good criticism.Author's Response: haha thanks Report Review
You're sick! A relationship is a sacred bond between a boy and a girl, and you have soiled it. Soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it, soiled it. Sweet story dude.Author's Response: haha thanks Report Review
omg sum of ur reviews should be alot nicer... it was very... interesting... but that don't give n/e one the right 2 be mean 2 u or ur story. all thou i was deeply desterbed (spelled wrong?) it was very well written and people should compliment ur writing instead of being a <<tag not allowed="red">tag not allowed="red">censored about the story being stupid, cuz they just being <<tag not allowed="red">tag not allowed="red">censoredy... great writing style n/e wayAuthor's Response: thank you so much. its much appreciated Report Review
ewAuthor's Response: umm..thnx? Report Review
more describtive sex!Author's Response: i couldnt use more descriptive sex because they are gay and its hard to describe something you've never lived. Report Review
that was sick dont do same sex pairings pleeeeeeeaaaaaaassssssse.Author's Response: ok i was only testing the waters at how ppl would respond im not going to do anymore Report Review
um, confusing, and not sort of realistic, but it's not horrible.Author's Response: o gee thanx a lot
hmm. it was kind of pointless because it was so short, but the relationships between the characters have potential. if you took a bit more time, lengthened up into a proper plot and gave the fun scenes like this more detail, it would be quite a pleasing little story. i really like the last line of the story, it was redeeming to the rest of it.Author's Response: thanx for the advice and all...^_^ Report Review
Wow! that was incredibly hot but the thought of someone throwing up while I'm having sex with them discourages me, BUT REALLY NICE FIC!!!Author's Response: thank you..lol..its kinda sick...lol..peace out Report Review
Great!Author's Response: thanks Report Review
im not really a fan of slash but it was okAuthor's Response: ok then thaks Report Review
That was so out of charachter that I couldn't make myself like it. Sorry. I'll give some of your other fics a shot though.Author's Response: thank you for the review, and being honest...bye Report Review
LET ME PONDER. GAYGAYGAYGAYGAY! THAT'S SICK! I AM THE INFAMOUS EMLOVER! READ MY STORY! LUV YA!!!Author's Response: will read thanks for the review/ Report Review
Um... it's intersting in a good way! Odd twist though...Author's Response: Thnx 4 the compliment..i think...i donno..om confuzed easily...lol Report Review
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