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Review #1, by iamatree The Betrayal

24th March 2006:
Hi, well I liked it. Seems like a feasible turn of events. I feel quite angry towards Pettigrew, especially as he was practically gloating as he handed over J/L. Quite good -iamatree

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Glad you enjoyed it, and I'm glad you were able to relate with the characters. Thanks for reading!

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Review #2, by Dumbledore_The_Phoenix The Betrayal

17th September 2005:
I told you I would read it... it's great, but there's just one tiny tiny thing that I think you might have forgotten.... Dumbledore didn't know Peter was the Secret Keeper. He thought it was Sirius. It was very good though. I really liked it. I especially liked the way James, Lily, and Sirius communicate with each other. I think that's perfect.

Author's Response: Really? I didn't know that. Because he cast the charm so I just assumed he knew. And if he didn't know, he knows now. Thanks for reading I really appreciate it!

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Review #3, by emily The Betrayal

30th August 2005:
de your story was so great!! even tho i dont know much about harry potter... you made your homedog proud and im sure annie (anthony) is proud also!!!

Author's Response: ....Thanks I guess....I didn't expect you to read it. I know Annie would be proud to. Working on revisions now! Thanks Em!

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Review #4, by grace The Betrayal

26th August 2005:
this story smells!!!.... like preetty roses!! amazing... absolutely amazing. hahahaha. peruvian nuns.. hilarious. great job! it was exactly how i imagined it happening and was written so well. youre my hero...

Author's Response: awww thanks Grace. It wasn't that good though..... and your my hero too....that sticker might still be on my sweater...i'll have to check. Thanks for reading!

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Review #5, by Sierra The Betrayal

21st August 2005:
Very good story!!

Author's Response: Why thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

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Review #6, by Hermiones_Revenge The Betrayal

20th August 2005:
Way to throw Peruvian Nuns into this story. It was total crap. I hated it.

I'm completely kidding, it was pretty good! Awesome first fanfic. Of course, now you're going to die and everything, because you were on the internet *doom music plays in the background* Hahahaha...err, anyway, great story, that sounds like exactly what happened! The only thing I'll say is that you should throw in more description instead of all dialogue. That was my issue too...which you probably noticed in the fiasco that was "Overturned". This was a really long review...OH! And *cough* WHY would you ask for a banner in your summary when you know VERY WELL that you have a SISTER who MAKES THEM?! I am done.

Author's Response: Thanks.....I had to put in Peruvian nuns....who wouldn't? And I know about the dialouge issue....Mr. Lignore brought that up too....I shall try....and I put the banner thing in because I know your busy and in case someone else did it first...or can still make me one though....I don't mind

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