{reviewid: 831159, reviewer: 'Sainteth'}
29th December 2005:
Thats really good!!!...You're making a great story out of it...^_^
Author's Response: why thanks .... same with your story !! ummm... i have to up date but i need to read over what i have written so far and get back into the swing of writting again .... PD happy new year
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{reviewid: 800412, reviewer: 'Sainteth'}
7th December 2005:
Absolutely wonderful...can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: thanks sainteth ..... hope you have a good christmas and new yr
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{reviewid: 735643, reviewer: 'justine'}
16th October 2005:
hey every body thing is justine ....i can seem to log into my account sooo i dnt no what to do hopefully ill be able to log in soon .sorry bout this
Author's Response: Soory bout my shocking typing i ment to say that i was having troubles logging in but that is all sorted out now !!!!!
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{reviewid: 714659, reviewer: 'Phantom%20Lord'}
30th September 2005:
The chapter was really good, though too short. I'm looking foreward to read more of your story.
Author's Response: lol...thanks me to cant wait to read more of your story 2 !!! thanks for reviewing
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{reviewid: 704438, reviewer: 'Ollie'}
22nd September 2005:
it is a bit confusing cause of the spelling mistakes but it's stilll good, i like, i think i know what's going on, but I'm not entirely sure..but i think i am... ok, it's good, let's settle on that
Author's Response: Thanks ..ill try and get one of my friends to fix my spelling in future i know it SUCKS so i'll try my hardest to improve.... thanks for the review
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{reviewid: 703896, reviewer: 'Sainteth'}
21st September 2005:
You still need to make the chapters longer, but so far so good!!!!!!!!!!:P:@:P
Author's Response: lol...what can i say ..its hard to write a story .... lol..i guess i just have to let my mind go
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{reviewid: 695073, reviewer: 'Sainteth'}
15th September 2005:
Good, good.......but you still need to write more......grrr
Author's Response: lol.... i will try i promise ...but i'd rather update every week with a little..
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{reviewid: 691198, reviewer: 'cutie17'}
11th September 2005:
wow ... kinda confused ,,, but still a GREAT story!!!! update soon!!!!!!
Author's Response: ok..ill update...how was it confussing let me know and ill try and fix it
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{reviewid: 689493, reviewer: 'Brooke'}
10th September 2005:
This is a really good piece of wrtting, can't wait for you to write some more!!!
Author's Response: thanx .. there will be more <3 jus
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{reviewid: 688571, reviewer: 'Phantom%20Lord'}
9th September 2005:
When are you going to update? I want to read more... Please update soon. Check out my third chapter if you want
Author's Response: well i updated a couple of days ago soo... ill update in a few days to a week promise <3 jus
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{reviewid: 686097, reviewer: 'Phantom%20Lord%28not%20logged%20in%29'}
7th September 2005:
I liked the first chapter and I liked even more the second chapter. I would like to read more and if you want you can check my story too and tell if you think it's good.
Author's Response: Thanks i will take a look at your story ....my update should be soon
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{reviewid: 685841, reviewer: '%2BGoDs-LiTtLe-RoCkEr%2B'}
7th September 2005:
Good Work justine... Its really good.... even I liked it (for harry potter:P) Im very proud of you
Author's Response: awwh..... GLR has seen the light in Harry potter knew id get there one day <3 jus
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{reviewid: 682452, reviewer: 'Sain%27'}
5th September 2005:
I'm gonna fix ur punctuation for you..........
Author's Response: haha thanks Sain' ur a saint:P
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{reviewid: 682448, reviewer: 'Sain%27'}
5th September 2005:
It's good...quite good actually...but you need to fix up your punctuation and WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Well thanks Sain'....there will be longer chapter promise
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{reviewid: 670401, reviewer: 'ekd'}
28th August 2005:
YAY! I'm hoping for some more romance...hehe...this is a good first chapter but PLEASE keep writing..i'm curious now
Author's Response: KOOl...your my first proper review the others were my friends :P you have me motivated to read... my update should be in the next week or so
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{reviewid: 658869, reviewer: 'Tara'}
21st August 2005:
hey jussy bussy!! cool story!!... its really good :) u really need 2 edit it though, its kinda hard 2 read :P anyways... byebye
Author's Response: haha lol i think i should do that lol... sorry every one
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{reviewid: 658824, reviewer: 'lara'}
21st August 2005:
i like it. but it depends what you do with it . i cant wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks im not sure when ill up date but i will
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