Loved the action. Pretty kick-ass! Report Review
good story loved the use of the blades Report Review
Very good story. I liked how you mixed muggle technology and magic. I would have liked to see this story be longer though. Maybe one day you can write a prequel to let fill us in on the happenings for the past six years.
Oh, I absolutely loved every part of this story! Very nice! Report Review
nice story. I love it. Short but enough backhground and the climax was well placed.Author's Response: Thnak you! Report Review
Hmmm. One-Shots kinda leave me wanting a little more backstory, but it was a good ass-kicking.Author's Response: For more extensive ass kicking, take a look at my ongoing magnum opus, The Unexpected Turn of Events. Report Review
That was a good read!
Keep it up!Author's Response: Thanks! I promise to keep trying... Report Review
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