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Review #1, by Anonymoose Meet everybody

10th June 2004:
Hmmmm... Well, its not a bad start. I suggest that you go into a little more detail with certain events, and maybe tell the story from a specific point of view to get a clearer picture of the characters, rather than an objective one in which there is less story-telling. Anywho, I thought it was a decent start; hope to see au update soon!!

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