arrrhrrrrrrrrrr this story is so cooolllll and sweeet and on my favs Report Review
awwwwwwwwwwww! i love this story update sooon!!!!!!!! Report Review
it is really gr8 so far i, would love to to read more Report Review
great story! Report Review
NO! NOT A FULL MOON!!!Author's Response: Yes, a full moon. Dun dun dun. Haha. Report Review
please post the next chapter! it was really sweet :) i really hope you finish it, bc i love james and lily stories and it seems like people abandon them a lot, and this one is really good so farAuthor's Response: Don't worry, I love James and Lily too. I will update. Report Review
finish your story.Author's Response: Lol. So blunt. Thansk for the review. Report Review
I like it. More, please, and ASAP.Author's Response: Thank you for the review, I appriciate it. Report Review
Ok well you already have six but heresa 7th review was good not much romance but a good start now that you have more than 5 review will you please, GET THE NEXT CHAPTER UP. LOL Author's Response: Thanks for the reivew, glad you like it. Report Review
I really like this story, i like the way you pulled off Lily, adn James' attitute, Good job, Keep it up!Author's Response: Haha, thanks. Glad you like it and thnaks for the review. Report Review
its really good, you do a good job i think, making the characters personality's fit correctly...some people don't do a very good job of that, but you do!! keep writing!!Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it. Report Review
Gah! What a cruel way to end the first chapter! -Glares- ^^ I really like this story, it's quite fast paced but you've written it really well, so it all flows together. I especially liked the beginning half of the story told in Lily's POV, it had quite a lot of subtle humour in it and was written beautifully. I will be keeping a look out for updates. xAuthor's Response: Sorry! Haha. It will get better, turst me. Thank you so much. I'm glad you like it. Report Review
This is a really cute fic so far. Taking Lily out on the broom was really cute of James. I liked it! I think that 10 reviews is a LOT though, I mean, it's your choice, but I just think that there are a lot of poeple that will love to read your story even if you don't get 10 reviews. I personally would really love to read more. Please write more soon! :)Author's Response: Thank you so much. Yes, I know. But in my other fic, I've had 3,000 reads and about 60 something reviews.....Do you think that's fair? I mean. Yeah it's brutal but still. Report Review
good start, i think this story is gonna be really cuteAuthor's Response: Thank you very much for the review, and i'm so glad you like it. Report Review
OK this is an awsome story.. you have to update. i love how you did this chapter.. it seemed so real. great job. keep up the good work ~Slytherinchica08~Author's Response: Thanks. I will. Glad you like it. Report Review
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