Oh! So. Cute. I love it! Report Review
... Insanity. Pure insanity.
Gotta love it, even if it was caused by a few too many bludgers to the head...Author's Response: Hehehe, yessssss....
Insane? Yes. Inane? Probably that as well. Thank you! (Bludgers are nifty little things, aren't they?) Report Review
He he I liked it, I think that Ron would be cursing like that if not more stuck in an infirmary with a bludger attack. You could have elaborated on the Hermione thing a little though, or maybe thats just me wanting to see Ron squirm.Author's Response: It's just you! Haha, just kidding. Thank you very much for the review, and I'm sorry the ending bit wasn't longer -- this was a very early fic for me, and isn't as elaborate as I would make it now. Report Review
I liked it, but I wish you wouldn't have made Hermione slap Ron! I'm a big Ron/Hermione fan. 7 out of ten for the slap. Read and review mine too please (but I do warn you it's not that good)!Author's Response: Well, I am a big R/H fan too, to tell the truth. However, it would have been OOC for Hermione not to smack his face after what he did, because of the context of what takes place. But a 7/10! Wow, thanks! Report Review
I really enjoy your story. It was very funny, and entertaining. I think you capture Ron’s thoughts very well here. I have always enjoyed stream of consciousness narratives. I think the length is perfect, any longer and it might get redundant. There were a few places that I felt maybe a word was missing, but other than that no typos or errors that I noticed. Very good job on a witty enjoyably one-shot!Author's Response: I've went back a few times and tried to edit out all the misspellings and such, but of course I'm bound to miss something somewhere. Just another time to run through and check again! Thanks for such an appreciated review! Report Review
Man, that was soooooooo funny! I laughed all the while reading your fic. You would think that I am over-reacting but I'll tell you that I have a wierd sense of humour! And my sense of humour says that your one-shot is very funny *grin* I just love Ron (and his fear for spiders *snigger*)Author's Response: A weird sense of humor should be cultivated! I thank you heartily for enjoying such a silly fic. And who doesn't love a funny little redhead with a fear of spiders? Report Review
Hheheheehe, this is a damn funny fic.Author's Response: Why thank you. Report Review
THAT WAS WICKED!!! SO FUNNY!!! I love this story, love it. Keep writing.Author's Response: Well, this is a one-shot, but I have other stories.... Thanks for the review! Report Review
ha ha ha!!!this is really funny!!!:)Author's Response: Glad you think so! Thanks for the review! Report Review
I am adding this in my FAVORITES!!!!! It ROX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! Glad to know you liked it so much! Report Review
That's really funny=) Great job!Author's Response: ahh, thank you! Report Review
Increasingly random. I loved the whole thing. Very good.Author's Response: Ah, more thanks for more praise! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I thought most wouldn't, seeing as Ron is a *bit* out of character for most of it. Except for the spiders. *cough-cough* hee! ^_^ Report Review
haha, oh man that was funny. haha, i love the spider part. lurved it!Author's Response: thanks! nice to know that you thought it was funny! Report Review
Ha! that was soo funny! I loved it!Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
oh! <<tag not allowed="red">tag not allowed="red">censored that was funny!
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you found it enjoyable! Thanks a lot for the review! Report Review
Lovely and most amusing, but I need to edit it! Author's Response: Fine you - you editing person! I will let you edit it. But only because you are a good friend. Thanks for the review! Report Review
Hahahahahaha! Love it. I wish it wasnt a one-shot. It would bo so cool to listen to Rons thoughts. It was really funny
Author's Response: Yeah, but eventually I'd run out of ideas, which totally stinks in my opinion. So we're keeping one-shot status for Ronnie boy right now. Thanks for the awesome review! Report Review
It's funny, I like it.Author's Response: Short, sweet, to the point. Thanks for the review! Report Review
Lol, good story....very funny, to bad this was only a one shot. Author's Response: Well, I've got other stories that aren't... but this is basically the only major humor one. So sorry, but thanks for the review! Report Review
i'm laughing here!!!
soooooo hilariously funny!Author's Response: AWESOME! After reading it so many times, to make sure it sounded right and all - I couldn't tell if it was humourous or not anymore. I'm glad to hear it was! Report Review
Nice, very nice. You spelled since wrong, but who cares when you've got Ron squealing over spiders. Great story! *applauds*Author's Response: Ah, thanks a bundle! I might fix it... It depends if I remember or not. Report Review
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