Oh this is really cute
I think you could add more on to it though
Or do a sequel
Keep on writting Report Review
It was pretty good. Report Review
HA! lol that is so funny! o love it! lol! Report Review
you have to update!!! really. that story was so cute. enchanting. im gonna jump out of my skin if i cant read morre. Report Review
wasn't that song by Toby keith?Author's Response: No, it's by Tupac Shakur. Are you mental? Report Review
LEX! This is great. I just might have to do the LEX ROX dance here. I like it so much. Ahhh! Puppy goodness.
I really do think you could continue if you wanted to write more, but I'm happy there was at least a 2nd chapter.Author's Response: Puppy goodness! To hell! Puppy wonderfulness! XD Not this fic, the ship. Even the worst WolfStar fic is Puppy Wonderfulness. Don't ask, please, I'm just an obsessed lil fangirl... Anyway, WHAT is with that dance? Oh yes. You'd better hurry with the Gin/Rem you promised! ;) Report Review
That was so cool! Hurry up and write more please. IT was very well written...congratulations. We dont care if that was meant to be a one shot fic or not... WE WANT MORE!!!
(littleaquarianprincess says that she needs ur help on info about Lupin for my story And Then There were None - please review latest chapter) ps... well done :)
Oh my freaking hell. I thought it was just an okay story..until i read the ending...that was absolutly brilliant! Inspired!
Hi, your old friend here (at least so I think)! That...That....Just...Wow. That was wicked, you had BETTER update this story! Very good twist on the end, I can imagine Remus' face when James said that. Hehe, gorgeous, love it. 10/10! Report Review
Oh that was good lol. I hope you will update soon plz!!!!!!!!lol i like this story= ) Report Review
well, what can I say? it happened to be the first HP fanfic I've ever read and I liked it really really a lot.... your style is good, very Harry Potter-like, and this Sirius/Remus thing.... I thought I'm some kind of weirdo, thinking up some shounen-ai stories related to HP, but now I see that I'm not the only one here ^.^ keep up the great great work!! Report Review
Er, excusez moi (pronounced ex-cyooz-ez mwah, not the French way), when are you planning on adding to this wonderfully delicious story? I hope I don't have to wait too much longer! - Octopus :-D! x x Report Review
So what's the deal, Lucille? I want more of this story. Sure you've got others to write, but don't forget this one, okay? Report Review
Hi, me again. For your information I'm quite used to slash so :-P to you! Nah, I read quite a lot of it but I don't read much Marauder/Lily/etc stuff, so I didn't really take it into account that people would write about Sirius and Remus in a slashy way. But update soon!Author's Response: Really? But... but... Remus/Sirius is the most common slash out there... hmm... Anyway, thanks for reviewing (again!) :) Report Review
I really liked that it was really good and I hope you write more soon.
~Danielle~ Report Review
Brilliant! Continue soon won't you? I still hate Peter and well, actually I can't stand James Potter but Siri and Remmy are my fav's....
Anyway babling on again, 10/10 lol just a thought did Sirius blush?? hahahaha
EllaAuthor's Response: Can't stand James?? *Convulses* How can you... how is it... oh, it's the arrogant thing in OotP, right? Hmph. I'll always love James! Yeah! *Pouts* But, yeah, here's to Siri and Remmy! Cheers! Yeah. Okay, I'm out. Thanks for reviewing, Erin dearest! :) Report Review
Ooooh, I never thought of Sirius and Remus in *that* way before! Hehe, write some more, I like the sound of where this is going...Author's Response: Never thought of them in that way? Ooo... newbie slasher! Woohoo! Hey, newbie slashers rock! I'll update ASAP, dar_devil120, sir/ma'am/octopus! Report Review
Very good!Author's Response: Thanks for the oh-so-thorough review, MJ dearest! Hahaha... I know, you had to leave... Report Review
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