{reviewid: 1965638, reviewer: 'Kayd'}
16th October 2008:
As the tears run down my cheeks i smile becasue that was so touching! thank you!
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{reviewid: 1478240, reviewer: 'HpsMyObession'}
24th June 2007:
Once again im in tears reding one of your stories (in a good way) i dont know how you do it. Capture the emotions and portray them so well. Stories dont normally make me cry except for Hp obviously!! If your not a published writer one day i'll... well i'll do something :D
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{reviewid: 1330275, reviewer: 'AshHa'}
5th March 2007:
It's so sad, yet exactly what Harry's life is. It's unbelievable how Harry has been able to take it so far, don't you think? I rate 10/10 on this heartbreaking story.
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{reviewid: 1317374, reviewer: 'DarkFaerii'}
22nd February 2007:
it was so beautiful...*sob*...so beautiful and *sniff* very very very SAD *breaks down in tears...*
it was beautiful
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{reviewid: 1243777, reviewer: 'Rupertluver2012'}
28th December 2006:
That was sad, wayyy sad! I'm crying, and it hurts to know that James was sooo sad to find out that one of his BEST FRIENDS.. one of the MARAUDERS was a traitor, how scary. Makes you think twice. But this story was not AT ALL horrible to read, it was brilliant. I loved it. Great job. 10/10.
*chow*
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{reviewid: 1242699, reviewer: 'iriskaren'}
27th December 2006:
This was beautifully written.
I loved it. Great job. :]
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{reviewid: 1233381, reviewer: 'charmed%20ravenclaw'}
19th December 2006:
It wasn't that horrible of a read! Yeesh, you should give yourself more credit! It was quite good - at least you don't make it too sappy.
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{reviewid: 1233018, reviewer: 'nourie%21%21%21'}
18th December 2006:
me again :D just read the other reviews by other people, some of which said that they cried during the story, so just ignore what i said...heehee, maybe i just dont cry anymore, im getting bigger... IM A BIG GIRL!!.:D
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{reviewid: 1233006, reviewer: 'nourie%21%21%21%21%21%20%3AD'}
18th December 2006:
of course it wasnt horrible to read, i was actually really good. i know this isnt very helpful advice but somehow, being the smart person that you are :P, you could try and make it more emotional. I know its already quite sad but its only flaw is that you dont actually feel the loss, the pain that harry's feeling. I read quite a few fics about james and lily (i have no life :P) that have actually make cry (well now you think im like a little pansy..heehee, pancy parkinson :D ...anyway but that's not the point :P) id give you their titles so you get the idea, but i have a dreadful memory :P anyway, whether you change it or not, its still really good!! :D
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{reviewid: 1177972, reviewer: 'Voodoo%20child'}
28th October 2006:
Oh it was beautiful!i cant say any more *snif*
10/10
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{reviewid: 1096209, reviewer: 'gryffindorgirl77'}
8th August 2006:
That was a great stiry but it was really sad!
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{reviewid: 948053, reviewer: 'Ly'}
22nd March 2006:
i thought that the story was a bit sad.
i luv the song by Nickelback!
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{reviewid: 945888, reviewer: 'slytheringinny'}
20th March 2006:
Omg....*sniff sniff*......I loved it....words cannot describe this.....I'm very very very touched by this. Great *sniff* job!
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{reviewid: 909363, reviewer: 'Jade%20Onix%20Moon'}
20th February 2006:
So Sad and Beautiful i really liked it
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{reviewid: 907565, reviewer: 'MsRaddishEarings'}
18th February 2006:
WOW!! FANTASTIC, but *sobsob* SAD!! Crying at the end.
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{reviewid: 900293, reviewer: 'star101'}
12th February 2006:
I love this story! I love your one-shots! Although I usually only read completed Lily/James stories, I am drawn to your one shots! Please write more one-shots!
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{reviewid: 863146, reviewer: 'dim%20at%20best'}
17th January 2006:
That wasn't completely horrible to read! What are you talking about?? I loved it, as much as I love the song 'Photograph' even. (That's a high compliment by the way). This fic seems so...happy...compared to other things I've read dealing with the direct aftermath of sixth year. It's good.
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{reviewid: 854531, reviewer: 'Idunnomyname'}
12th January 2006:
Pretty cool. Makes me look even more forward to the 7th.
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{reviewid: 853392, reviewer: 'msbigbad'}
11th January 2006:
that was such a touching story!! Made me cry!! Very well written.
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{reviewid: 841205, reviewer: 'Kivx'}
4th January 2006:
waaahhh!! nice nice!! love it. v(-.-)v
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{reviewid: 812462, reviewer: 'Dave'}
15th December 2005:
3 letters W-O-W
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{reviewid: 797539, reviewer: 'Aspares%20%28not%20signed%20in%29'}
5th December 2005:
it it not at all horrible to read, i love it! It was so sad and so good.
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{reviewid: 777840, reviewer: 'Padfoots%20Girl%2032'}
20th November 2005:
i love it and think its great and if you have time maybe review my story
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{reviewid: 768451, reviewer: 'Laiya%20Angel'}
12th November 2005:
Wow, that's so good. It wan't horrible, it was really good, i really enjoyed it, please keep writing
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{reviewid: 764134, reviewer: 'Alyson'}
9th November 2005:
I couldn't help but cry! I still have tears running down my cheeks and I have been wiping them away for 5 minutes! This is almost exactly what I did when my best friends died... you portray emotion absolutly mesmerzingly, you put into words what every single person in this world feels when they lose someone! You are a truly amzing writer! Email me when you get a new story- I want to read everything you have! And if you ever become a writer for real save me an exclusive copy!!
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