Ah! It just ends. I can't wait till the next chapter.

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This story appears to be abandoned and I would like to let you know that breaks my heart. I was just getting into it.

:(

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WOW...ok so that was intense...does the sword have some sort of power over the person who retreives it or was it of DM's choice?? Really great fic.

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omg y did DM try to kill GW?? I thought they was in love...boy o boy this is so confusin!! LOL

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Please, please can you continue the story.

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What an amazing story. i loved VI and this is super good i cannot wait for you to update.

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I love your stories! You are an amazing author and they have captivated me from the beginning. I was really disappointed when I started this one and found myself at the end with no indication of continuing. Please, please, please,... I beg you to finish. I am dying to find out what happens next!

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You have a wonderful imagination! That was clear after I read The Visable Invisable. So, when I saw that you had began a sequel, I had to read!

You have the ability to create a mystery that makes readers beg for more!

Of course, now, I'm kicking myself for ever starting to read The Balin Connection! I couldn't help myself; I was drawn in from the first chapter and couldn't stop. And now it appears that this story has been abandoned.

It really is a shame. The note at the end of this chapter promised 'More to come soon.' But the 'more' never came, making me, and I'm sure all of your readers very dissappointed.

I really believed that this was going to be an exeptionally great story! And if you are struck with the desire to write more, I know it will not dissappoint. You are simply too good a writer!

Could you please let all us fans know if you will continue The Balin Connection? I think I can speak for all when I say, I hope you do.

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Aghhh! You can't just leave it there. I must have more:)

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I love this story I want to see what happen next are you planing to ever update it or have you abandon it? If you abandon the story it a shame.

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I just finished reading The Visible Invisible and loved it SO much! This is my first D/G fic and now I'm hooked. It's VERY sad to see this one isn't done :(
PLEASE update - I NEED to know what happens!

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Please update...I dont know how long its been since you've updated last, but i like the story a lot so far!

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I am so disappointed to find that this lovely story has been abandoned, even though still listed as a WIP. Since it's been over a year since the last update, and I just discovered it and its prequel, thought I'd add my comment that this is one of the most original and engrossing stories I've found on this site.

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I know you haven't updated this in forever. But there are so many places you can go with this! Please don't let it end there!
Please continue!
I want to know what part Darien plays in all of this!
It is so intriguing!
PLEASE!

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This is great! I love how everything seems to twist and turn!

Update soon!

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First of all, can you make this guy any hotter? Enough of Ginny being in love with him - I totally am too ! :) I really, really love this story. Has a lot of good stuff going on, and I love the background you've given for Ginny, it makes her character very well-rounded. Glad to see she's recovering, but the whole "messed up" period is very true to life. Trauma takes time and I think you've dealt with it well. Hope you get back to it soon, but I don't mind if this runs into a very, very long read. I love this universe and don't wan't to see it end.

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Gosh I love your stories. They draw me in right from the start, and you write very well. Keep up the great work!

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i can't wait for more! please update soon!

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im too excited to read the next chapter to say much, except (as always) GREAT JOB!!

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ew. date-raping her mind? gross. however, well written and gripping... great job!

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great job! i can't wait to read more!

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okay, this chapter was just so beautiful. like, i started crying when draco said, 'you should never die for the people you love. you should live for them.' and then i bawled when he came back. im so happy that he's back! you rock, your story rocks, everything rocks right now (yeah, thats how happy you've made me!)

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I KNEW IT! I knew he was there to make moves on her! I never really liked him to begin with. And these flashbacks of Draco are making me so sad; a good sad, though- bittersweet. It's making it very enjoyable. Onto the next chapter!

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That's really sad, how she's losing her memories of him. I hope against hope that something EXTREMELY good is going to come out of all of this (like, oh, I dunno, they get back together in the end???), but if nothing does, I'll still think it's one of the best stories I've read on this site.

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im seriously in love with these flashbacks. they're so perfect. you know how to write romantic scenes just right, you know. not too mushy, not to... unromantic. great job! keep it up!

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