It could have been longer, and what about Lavender, or did he break up with her...No, i remember when Hermione said "Don't let Lavender hear u say that." Ron just said he shouldn't but then...why am i explaining this? All in all, needs to be longer, and maybe mention Lavender...50~100 Report Review
Hahaha it was very sweet, but completely atypical of Ron and Hermione!Author's Response: lol..one of my older stories.. Report Review
AWww cute.. see i told you ive read almost all of these.Author's Response: this is way old, but i appreciate you reading it! thanks! Report Review
I actually think that was supposed to be read into the book... and if it wasn't... brilliant.Author's Response: thats what i thought! kinda why i wrote it. lol. thanks!! Report Review
A little rushed and unrealistic. but it was still a nice try! Keep writing!
love ~KAuthor's Response: thanks. this was written awhile ago before a lot of my stories. i think ive gotten better at writing since them. lol Report Review
awww that is well sweet!!!Author's Response: thanks! Report Review
wow that was...rushed. but cute tho
-peace out my gangsta homies Report Review
Hey, there! Since you have been so gracious as to check me out, I wanted to return the courtosey. :) I really liked this story, not too sappy and not too fluffy-just right. You had me smiling the whole time. It's sort of a "missing moment" story in a way and missing moments are one genre that I absolutely love! Great work!Author's Response: thanks for the great review! this was the first 'missing moment' and one-shot, so i'm glad you liked it!! Report Review
lol aww it's short and sweet. just how i like em. brilliant! lol.
xxxxx Report Review
Cheesy, like me. I'm made of cheeeeeeese Report Review
Wow, that was really great! That's what SHOULD have happened after Ron said those fateful four words! Report Review
that was cool could have done with a bit more details but its stil one of the best R/Hr ones i've read!! Report Review
well,i thot it was a bit cheesy and short,but it WAS fluff and you DID write it really fast.still liked it=)~addicted Report Review
another fluffy shot. thanks for the fillerup. Report Review
a bit quick...
cute Report Review
not to be mean or anything, n=but it was pretty good, but woundnt you say it was slightly too cheezy? but it was pretty good for a one-shot but can you now update the journal?? please please please? Report Review
GEEZE! That was horribly short! 549 words! I thought they were supposed to be 800? Maybe because it's a one-shot.... Anyway, I didn't like it. I'm sorry, but it was just too short! Report Review
Incase you dont check your email, im writing this here to. Yes i would love it if you mailed me the next chapter of your other story. My email is DunneyB@aol.com THX! Report Review
I really liked it! xoxo Rons~Luva!
(I like tinker belle and i felt like usin a new name 2day!) Report Review
very cute-- short, very fluffy, but im easy to please and i loved it! awesome! Report Review
Good job. I was in the mood for something short and this did it for me.
BTW... i still stand by my last review for your other story back on MNFF. EMAIL IT TO US =)Author's Response: if you give me your email, i'll email it to YOU! but you have to promise not to tell anyone about anything! Report Review
Oh my Godness, that was so sweet and cute, really nice first one shot.
Loved it. Report Review
Awww! Thats really cute! Love it! Report Review
It was so corny..It was cute!!! I liked it!! Report Review
what was the spoiler?????????
i little sappy at the end but i still looooooooove it!!!Author's Response: lol. the spoiler was the "i love you, hermione" lol. i DID say it was realllly small! lol. glad you like it! Report Review
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