3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by lily flower Telling Her

26th April 2008:
Oh this is really sweet

but it doesn't seem like its quite finished yet

I think you should maybe make it a bit longer


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Review #2, by Patil Twins Telling Her

10th August 2005:
THAT WAS TOTALLY WICKED! (Right)-we say sarcastically. Don't worry you'll get the hang of it. Try using younger characters. Sorry but the thought of Dumbledore doing it makes me gag. Think about it. Old, wrinkley, skinny, very hairy, Dumbledore, yeah, ewww! Not right.

Author's Response: its set along time from the present, like 55 years. Anyway, lots of people have sex, how do you think your parents ended up on this planet. :)

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Review #3, by HPLVR24 Telling Her

10th August 2005:

Author's Response: Thank You! It was upposed to be longer but something happened , I'll get the rest of it in soon!

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