omg this is 1 of the sweetest fics ever aw

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really good. is it finished?

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:) An update! Wow... Fabian's back... Andromeda's engaged (sort of)... Andromeda won't be joining the Order (brilliant reason, by the way, very believable)... and only two months left to live! Ack! Andromeda better have something up her sleeve... "It's time" ACK!

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An update, after so long! Hurrah! :) Lovely... lovely, as usual. Andromeda doesn't have much longer, does she? Oooh, she better survive. Please? And, if it isn't a bother, please let the next chapter come quicker!

Author's Response: Ah, sorry, school's starting to eat me slowly. I'll upload the next chapter right now. And there's four more chapters...but thank you for reviewing!

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Oh, for Merlin's velveteen teddy bear! That was brilliant! Three visions in one chapter?! Andromeda is getting good, isn't she? You gave a good explanation as to why Andromeda, as far as we know, didn't join the Order. Creative and it makes sense. A rarity these days...

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! The precious time of the day where I'm creative AND make sense is when I'm writing fanfic, so...yeah...heh.

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This chapter was superb! I positively love the small things thrown in to make the story more amusing, like the name "Guy Fawkes Day." I mean what on Earth is that!? I have no idea but it's quite comical none-the-less!!! I also like how you seemlessly showed a transformation in Lady Lily, by allowing her to quickly tell them little bits about herself so she could suddenly be understood. And the last line about Ladly Lily dying and Lily Evans being born is fantastic.

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! Guy Fawkes Day is actually a holiday in Britain that is in early November (I want to say the second) - on that day, a man named Guy Fawkes tried to do something to the men in Parliament (kill them, I think). But he was discovered and killed. They made that day a holiday called Guy Fawkes Day (or Bonfire Night), and on that day, British-type people burn little Guy Fawkeses made of sticks and set off fireworks. *isn't British so she's not sure on the details* And the transformation in Lily is one of my favorite things to write!

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HAHA! Andromeda having to abbreviate is so cute and so sad at the same time! The wedding was so boring (because, of course, Andromeda writes it as boring) and funny! HAH! Sirius' House-Elf Conspiracy was so great and so very Sirius. THEY'RE OUT TO KILL ANDROMEDA?! Of course. I should have expected that. In six months? I was thinking sooner. The suspense mounts!

Author's Response: Well, the Dark Lord works in mysterious ways...and plus, if they tried to kill her sooner, I wouldn't have a story! But thanks for the review!

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Awwww :) That's so funny and so sweet and so adorable! You do it with great dialogue and events. You're an awesome writer, and *you* are going in my Favorite Authors.

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! Little positive reviews like this kind of help me get through the day, lol (esp. since school started again *groan*) Thank you so much!

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Sorry it's been awhile, my Internet was down, but this was very satisfactory. A celebration is creative, and I like the appearance of Lady Lily, I mean Lily Evans.

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I love the way you've continued this. And I like the Snape thing, because I never really thought of Sirius and "carrying on the family tradition" without knowing it. Very interesting. And the part where she meets Remus who will eventually have a thing with Tonks...very nicely done. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks! Every time it mentions Remus fancying Andromeda, I just have to laugh...

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And the llama named Harry was a nice touch! Wouldn't it be funny if Harry was named after a llama!??! *falls over laughing at the sheer thought*

Author's Response: You've reviewed every chapter - I think I love you, heh. I was out of names for a llama and got a sneaking thought of Harry being named after the llama...sadly, I don't think that's the case seeing as neither Lily nor James see Harry...because he mysteriously disappears through a gaping plot hole halfway through!

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Now don't laugh, but what on Earth is a 'swot?' I've never heard the word before, but am guessing that it means goody-goody or something of the sort? Is it slang from a particular region? (Like the UK, western US, etc.) And Bella doesn't want to get married?!? Wow thats a shocker! Great work on having Cissa just show up like that!

Author's Response: Swot is British slang for a goody-goody, nerd, that sort of a thing. It's okay - I'd never heard it until I read the Confessions of Georgia Nicolson by Louise Rennison, which takes place in the UK. But thank you!

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The interaction with Sirius is simply fabulous as well! And Lily Evans!?!?!? Man your really playing with all of the characters aren't you!? I like the interaction!

Author's Response: Like I've said earlier - I reread the third chapter after I finished writing it and just said, "OMG HOW COULD I HAVE DONE THAT TO LILY???" seeing as she's one of my fav. characters...but she'll be changed for the better...thanks for reviewing!

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I'm loving Andromeda's personality quirks. LIke how some people can call her Andy and get away with it, while others cannot. I'm like that as well with my name so really relate and find that realistic. I also LOVE her reactions when Ted is around! Great, HYSTERICAL, work!

Author's Response: I tried to make Andromeda a realistic person...she's really a conglomeration of all my friends, so glad to see the realism helped! Thanks for reviewing!

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Hey there! First I just wanted to congratulate you on writing an excellent fanfiction! I am truly enjoying it, have added it to my favorites, and will eagerly await the next update!

Secondly, I just wanted to urge you to continue writing. I saw on your homepage that you are thirteen, and if your writing is at this level already you will truly be amongst the most gifted writers by college. You have a talent and I can only thank you for sharing it with us in a humorous way on this site! Keep up the great work!

From your friendly college English tutor, firefawn. lol

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Honestly, this is all bewildering to me - I never anticipated this much of a positive reaction from anyone! I was expecting reviews more along the lines of, "Eh, everyone's OOC, it sucks, don't quit your day job!" (hence the surprise) Thanks again!

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Little name error, here: MacNair's first name is Walden, not Walter. And I just went to your author's page and saw: you're thirteen! Wow! So am I!

Author's Response: Yes...I realized that a few days ago and it MADE ME SO MAD!!! Aghhh! As for being thirteen - rock on!

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Wow! The Perfection That is This Chapter! Andromeda, Josie, Harmonia, Remus, Ted, Cissy, Bella -- everyone! Including Harry. I see where you get names like Lyra and Harmonia and that kind of thing. "Little bugger bit my crotch." That was hilarious! As was "Merlin's beard, was Carina his lover? Answer me, Remus!" I love this story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Honestly you have no idea how much these reviews mean to me...submitting a new chapter very soon!

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yahhhhh you updated...gotta have more soon though!!!!! me loves it me loves it alot!!!

Author's Response: Don't worry; another chapter is in the process of being validated as we speak!

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HAHA! This is one of the funniest fics I have ever read! Andromeda is so delightfully sarcastic, Ted is so seemingly perfect, Sirius is insane (I love insane characters), and Fireball -- that's such a creative take on Lily! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! I actually LIKE Lily, but I black out when I write, and so when I reread this chapter I was like, "Holy Jesus, what did I do to Lily?" But Lily isn't always the swotty crazy Fireball she is in this chapter...

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This is brilliantly funny! I don't know why you don't have more reviews...Though I guess not many people read humor anymore since the "i'm reely high! sugar whee! randomness!"-parody arrived. So sad...anyhow, please keep going! I was laughing out loud to her reactions to Ted Tonks. This is the most truly witty thing I've read in a long time. One comment--when she was trying to get out of the cupboard, why didn't someone take out a wand and Stun her? She certainly gave them enough time...It didn't make sense. While you're beyond perfect with the dialogue, you're maybe not as great with action (it's actually one of my problems as well). PLEASE keep going. You're too good a writer not to... ~JJ

Author's Response: Why didn't anyone Stun her? Because I wrote the bulk of that chapter almost two years ago when I was 12, lol. Thanks for the compliment on the dialogue. I find too often that a lot of fanfic dialogue is either REALLY cheesy or REALLY stiff, so I try to make sure that none of my dialogue fits under that category. Don't worry, I'll continue - I have almost five more chapters written at the moment, and I don't plan to stop!

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Oh, Merlin that was incredible! Like I said, I think of Andromeda almost exactly like you do. Brunette, green eyes, Ravenclaw -- it's uncanny. But I love it :) Andromeda is just so funny... there really should be more people reading this. I mean it. Awesome work, especially with the train. You're just incredible. Another add-in to the ol' favorites list!

Author's Response: Wooooooooow. I really don't know what to say. Thank you SO much, you really have no idea how much that means to me!

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Oog...This is fl00feh...But not overdone. Nice..Very nice.^^

Author's Response: Yes, for the first few chapters, it's fluffy...but there's going to be substance eventually...I know it! Thanks for reviewing!

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Hmmmmm....... I forgot it was a story. It was entrancing. PLEASE WRITE MOOOOOOOOOORRRREE

Author's Response: Ooh, that makes me feel good! Sometimes I forget I'm not Andromeda, lol...don't worry, I have six chapters already written and plenty more to come.

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Yeah! An Andromeda fic! I've been looking for these. I've been in the process of writing a fic about her as well, but you've done beautifully. The whole thing seemed so how I imagine her. Awesome job.

Author's Response: Oh, me too! It seems like you can never find anything about Andromeda. Thank you!

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I like this..I like it alot. It's a twist on the average Past story, I can't wait til it get's more into it...^^

Author's Response: Thanks! I tried to make it different, so I'm glad to see you think that it is different.

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