I keep wondering what was in the secret room. I feel like I should know or something, but I just don't. GREAT JOB writing so far! FANTASTICALLY AMAZING JOB!! :) I look forward to reading the rest of the story as you finish it. Although I suppose I'll just have to read the new version since this one is abandoned, huh? Keep up the great writing though! We need more original and creative writers like you to keep fanfiction as exciting as ever!

Author's Response: Thanks...that's one hell of a compliment...I'm gonna include the mystery room in the new version because it's something planned and I really like the idea...it's nothing really serious though...Pericolo did laugh when she saw it.

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bugger i was looking forward to reding the rest of this can u continue it just 4 me pwease u can still continue to write another one you can think of the other on as a improved version of thisd one

Author's Response: I might...possibly...it's is nice to write about an almighty powerful character..

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Well, isnt she an interesting girl.. I cant wait to know what she does next.. :P Keep writing.. :D

Author's Response: Thank you...unfortunately I'm a bit dissatisfied with the way I've portrayed her character, so this story will be getting some drastic rewiting done before I contiinue it. I enough people want, I'll leave the old version online, if not it will disappear...

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I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
KEEP GOING THIS IS AWSOME!!!!!! IM WAITING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER


Author's Response: sorry, but I'm doing my exams at the moment, but after they're done I might pick this up again...might re-write it slightly

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Haha! I like it the end of this chapter 2.It was a little on the short side but thats ok. I can't wait 4 the update though. FAITH IS SOOOOO LUCKY!! She gets 2 b a Marauder and we don't...how rude.^_^Oh well. Who could blame her? U know what? I wish u could actually fall in2 a HP book. That would b awesomeness of awesomnesses.*sighs of not being able2 b in HP books* I think that it's sweet how Sirius is thinking about her happiness.This is sooo interesting 2 read! Can't wait 4 the next chap-chap!^_^Update soon! HARRYSDAUGHTER

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Good god, thats just disgusting! wtf! a 17-year-old, more powerful than Albus Dumbledore. Put him in a full body bind. Broke into his office. Again I say! wtf! She's a freakin Mary Sue! Warning! Give Warning, person! god, im gonna be sick...

Author's Response: well, if you don't like it don't read it...she's not perfect though...I haven't finished the story...

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man, thats just not right. You cant write a story like this and not put a Mary Sue warning on it. Just plain wrong. I should probably stop reading or the evil affects of the mary sue might start to affect me. I like the idea but you really should give warning

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I'll make you a new banner!! Do you anime pic's of the people or the animagus? I can get anime pics of both if you want both just tell me. E-mail: iggythegreatandwonderful@hotmail.com

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I love it. hurry up and update I've been waiting for 2 months now!

Author's Response: absence makes the heart grow fonder :-D

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OH! WHAT??? but but... i wanna know what the room is... : ( ok.. fine. "Hey, I'm ticklish there!" who said that one? lol. ahhh Sirius... Man i want to see his go after her! I'd be fun!

Author's Response: Prongs is the ticklish one

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you are very evil. no kudos for you!!

Author's Response: *evil grin*

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Faith knowing more than Dumbledore? .... i have ideas about the room...but theyre best stuck in my head for no one to hear. Update Soon! There are things I would LOVE to read about! aka snogging : ) what can i say? I'm girlie... Good Chappie!

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that was so mean!!please update soon i want to know what it is!!lol

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*Giggles* I'm kind of expecting something naughty... Please update quickly!

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your welcome for my support! wow I sound arragont (sp?) What's Faith's plan?? Does it have something to do wtih Sirius or is it something bigger??? well update soon! (if you can I know many people have school.)

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OMG, Faith has a weakness! ahh padfoot...always there for a lady in need....Keep it up!

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Is she trying to get Sirius jealous? i have this itching feeling about them...hmmm....oh and thanks for the thanks! lol. I wouldn't be reviewing if you weren't such a good writer! Keep up the good work and update soon!

Author's Response: Thankyou!

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Cliffhangers! They must die! Hehe, Lovely! Let's see if Sirius can withstand the Jealousy when he sees Zabini and Faith!

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Nice Patronus! Speaking of love Paddyfoot needs to make a move! Hehehehe Great chapter as always!

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keep goin it good

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hey i like you story, i could make a banner for you, if you want...

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update, update, update!!! (and soon please!)

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very good, keep up the good work

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good. now update. and these chapters are getting shorter. lol.

Author's Response: The next chapter should be longer

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lol... Dumbledore in a fully body bind curse... "Whoops" oh man that's great. Albus is such a great character. Why do I think that there is something more to these detentions? Is that just me or is there? probably can't tell me huh... ahh well. Great Chappie. and as always Update soon!

Author's Response: you're right, I can't tell you...but I can make you extremely impatient by saying sublte hints like the above... ;-)

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