Wow, how much would I love to be her at the end of that story?!
There must be more chapters!
I love it, a new character in the harry potter books, someone for Lucius to have an affair with, hehe that would make an amusing story :P Brilliant :DAuthor's Response: There aren't anymore chapters as of right now, but if I'm inspired enough I might add another story to the series. Don't really know yet, lol. Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
oooh i like this, you dont see many lucius romance fics. I hope you continue it and dont leave it as a one shot!Author's Response: thank you, thank you. *bows* I love writing about Lucius. It's fun. ;-) Report Review
Although I'm not sure that this would pass the TOS, I enjoyed the combination of dialogue, description, and thought. Excellent job balancing those essential elements in a dramatic shot.Author's Response: i don't think i broke any tos. thanks for reviewing and enjoying the the fic. :-) Report Review
that was interesting and funny how lucius just leaves I can see him being attractive (like malfoy)in that sinister kind of way. If you know what I mean. Us girls just like the bad boys tee hee *)/Author's Response: yes we do. you gotta love the bad boys. Its fun to write about them too. hint hint. LOL! Thanks for reviewing Report Review
wow! that was .....um....ok yea i liked it.Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm glad you liked it! :) Report Review
that story was so random but it worked
Author's Response: Thank you Foxy. And thanks for reviewing. Report Review
Good start....like to see more background if ever decide to rewrite it but good.Author's Response: Thanks! I don't think i'll rewrite it because i just know i won't do it justice after i wrote this little bit, but who knows right? Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
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