THAT WAS AWESOME! IT WAS SOOO FUNNY! Report Review
I loved how you had Lily (as James) applying makeup. It sounds like an interesting chapter to write. Report Review
I absolutely love this story. This is my second time reading this because I loved it so much. I would love you to write another body swapping story. Report Review
This chapter is so funny. I love it. One of my favourites so far. The way James loves Lily is so cute. I also love how James would go out on a date with Freddie for her. Report Review
I think this chapter is great. I felt so bad for both Lily and Snape because he's getting beat up while Lily has to watch. I did love it when James knew the whole plan though. It made me smile. Report Review
I absolutely love this chapter. This whole fan fiction so far! I think how James and Lily banter with each other is so great for the story. I also love how you portray Sirius Black. Report Review
this was truely amazing!
Loved that Lily kissed James while still in his body - hilarious sight!!! Report Review
OH MY GOD THIS IS AMAZING!!
HAHAHAHA - LOVE IT :) Report Review
This was so sweet and an amazing idea Report Review
I think I read this one awhile back, but came across it again today, and read it again. So funny. I was actually cracking up with the snape-pinata, and so many other moments. I know its a bit late, but I just wanted to thank you for brightening my day with your witty writing. I hope youre still writing, even if it isnt fanfiction, because you really are talented.
RJ x Report Review
This was an amazing story! I absolutely loved it! I thought the way that you portrayed Lily and James was great. Keep Writing! Report Review
its a fun story. i am having a blast reading it.it is one of the best fan fics i have ever read Report Review
Oh my. This was a very good story to read. I did notice a few things out of order though. How could Lily and James have a cat (as it says in the seventh book in Lily's letter to Sirius) if they were both allergic? Plus in this chapter with Harry, in his seventh year, he was already at the Weasley's at least a week before his birthday, in this story you have him at Privet Drive. I know I sound very critical right now and you might even report this reveiw, but my reveiws always come rich in detail and I feel no need to hold back any sort of mistakes I see on your part. I very much enjoyed reading this Fanfiction, no matter what you think, and hope you will write many more like it. Please fix the above errors and this nine will become a ten.
14liilyflowergirl 9/10 Report Review
this has simply got to be one of the most awesum and amazing stories i've ever read...!!!
its got romance, humour , drama ...everything!
some parts nearly had me in splits (think freddie)
keep up the good work
i simply luvvd ur story.! Report Review
Wow, tht was a great story! I enjoyed every moment of it. They were all in character *except the Snape and Lily as friends* part but besides that, it was wonderful. Great job. Report Review
I love this interpretation of how James and Lily fell in love!! This is definitely plausible for it in my mind. Your story is great!
*love* Report Review
awww. sigh. it's so sad coz we all know how james and lils' story ended, but this was absolutely brilliant. brava. Report Review
i thought james was a seeker...
either way, brill! Report Review
i like how you've written james' character in this story. he's not overly adoring of lily. yeah, he likes her, but there's still some tension between them that isn't all lily. LOVE IT!
oh, and the part where james immitated lily had me cracking up. Report Review
insanely adorable story.
this was so cute! i loved it!
i'd appreciate it if you'd take a look at mine. Thank you and update sooonnn! Report Review
omg this was awesome!! its so cute!!
it was fluffy, humorous, dramatic, one of my top 8 fanfics now!!
my favourite genre is for sure james/lily, and you definately did it justice!!!
ive read many of your stories, and enjoyed them all!!
xoxo Report Review
Awww.. So sorry I didn't review every chapter, but I simply wanted just to read and read and read.. Hehe
I really loved this! So funny, cute and just funny.. Hahah.. I laughed a lot! Poor James and Lily!! They were trapped.. I loved the date with Freddie! :D Hahahahaha.. And the way you've written it all..
Sirius' past was also great, though I didn't like that you made Snape such an asshole! Hahah.. I like him! Hahahahahaha.. But otherwise it was great, original and believeble..
You do have small typoes here and there (such as though/thought and forgetting the last letter or something like that), but it's nothing too serious.. Hehe..
I really loved this story!! :D One of the best James/Lily..
I hope you continue writing..
Pingo Report Review
haha i loved it. alot. very very very very very very good. i would write more verys but im on the verge of making a spelling mistake, anyways 10/10
hahaha i finished the last chapter and thought it was the end. but i loved the last chapter it was wonderful. i love the part about james and freddie. i nearly cried with laughter Report Review
HA! I loved picturing Remus as an Iguana! Report Review
Hi. Very good job. I like it. Report Review
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