Very nice. I like the hints of what's to come with her. What can I say I fell for him back in poa

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OMG UPDATE PLEASE! I LOVE THIS STORY! CMON ITS BEEN MORE THEN A YEAR THATS LONG ENOUGH! PLEASE UPDATE!

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Hey this is great! I'm really loving it :D One quick thing though, on the summary of chpt 1, it says he's had pants for as long as he can remember, It might just be cause I'm a doofus (lol) but It's a bit confusing :P What does it mean? xD
Mert ::))

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wow that was great please up date soon i want to no how it
ends!

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This is such a good story and exciting too. I like that you made her the youngest of a bunch of her family it seems like everywhere she goes someone is trying to protect her from something. It's a good angle for the story. I want to read more :)

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aw MORE MORE MORE LOL PLZ UPDATE LOL

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excellent chapter, very well written and i had fun reading it since i know/speak alot of spanish

~ALy

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Hopefully you'll also enjoy the next one.

Paola

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I love it! And it's really sweet! Please update soon!

Author's Response: The next chapter has been submitted, hopefully you'll love it too.

Thanks,

Paola

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Yay, spanish gcse actually paid off. I understood the spanish. Shocked myself as well. Glad for the update, likeed it. There were a few spelling mistakes, like Moddy instead of Moody, but aside from that it was brill.

Author's Response: Gracias por el comentario!!!!

Yes, I definetly need to deal with those mistakes, maybe write with a dictionary next to me... LOL

Thanks,

Paola

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That chapter was awesome, my eyes crave more!

Author's Response: Next chapter has been added, and i hope you enjoy it as much also.

Thanks,

Paola

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WOW! Amazing. Love it.

Author's Response: Thanks!!!

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I really like this chapter. I love her family and her nickname. Sweet!

10/10 Really good, please update soon!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, the next chapter is already up and I hope you enjoy it.

Coments always welcomed.

Paola

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HEY you are so good! work on the spelling
its mischief
and spelt
and sent
etc
but great story LOvE it
10/10

Author's Response: I'm glad yo like the story.
Sorry about the spelling, I try to post the chapters with as few mistakes as possible, but grammar has never been my strong point. However, when I notice one I try to correct them.

Hope you like the next chapter.

Paola

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great chapter. write more!

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ha, Tonks is just like me! Curiosity is my greatest weakness too. My friend Jenny will tell me "DONT READ *such and such* STORY ON HPFF! IT'S WRONG ON SOO MANY LEVELS!" So, of course, I must read it just to see how wrong it is...10/10 for a lovely chapter

Author's Response: Well, then I'm glad you liked it!!!!
Keep reading and reviewing, and don't feel bad for giving criticism... I read it and use it to better my writting.

Paola

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yay, update soon please

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brill and i like the idea of a prophicy between lupin and tonks

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Guess their relationship is getting somewhere, finally... I like the little fun both Remus and Dora had. I think if I'm among the crowd I would have jaw-dropped too! Thank you for the long awaited update!

Author's Response: I know, it took me a while to start moving their relationship somewhere.

I'm glad you liked the chapter, and hope to hear your comments on the next one.

Paola

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i love the dueling parts, Tonks is my favorite hp character!

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that was awesome. keep it up. im waiting for the next chapter.i luv it!

Author's Response: I hope the next chapter is up to standards.
Thanks for the review.

Paola

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Yay! Remus is noticing her. i think the ass-grabbing was by accident, but still he is definitely looking at her differently. She would look good with red hair. I love Bill and Sirius' reactions to the 'hair incident" did they change back? Please Update soon!

Author's Response: Ohh yes, the ass-grabbing was definetly an accident, I can't imagine him doing it on purpose, but it's fun to embarass him.

In matters of the hair let's just say that Fleur was not amussed.

Paola

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its really good so far. hope theres more soon :)

Author's Response: First of all: Thanks for the review!!!

Second: Since classes started updates will be longer to come by, but that'll probably also mean longer chapters.

Try not to loose interest on this story, it will get finished.

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god
i waited so long fot this
but it was worth
10/10
i hope to hear more from this
keep on writing, you're doing great so far
XXOO

Author's Response: I'm sorry for the long wait, i know it can be frustraiting, unfortunatelly with classes starting the time between updates will be longer, though i hope that means longer and better chapters.

Paola

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Darn I forgot to hit submit the first time. Marriage laws. I love mariage laws. You can put your characters in some serious misery with those. Usually everything works out in the end. I honestly assume there are marriage laws for werewolves unless of course they take it for granted that werewolves never marry. I bet umbridge is behinf those laws. I hope we get to see her. She needs to be bashed. Preferably with a baseball bat, but winning a verbal match or throwing over one of her laws would be nice too.

Author's Response: Ahh, marriage laws, those won't be too much trouble for a couple of chapters. Umbridge, she's another story, believe me, she'll get what she deserves.

Paola

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Good so far. I noticed a few grammar and spelling errors so you could look that over, but there was nothing serious. I like the story so far. The whole 'my friend is crazy' thing was pretty funny. I think you're right about Tonks not arresting sirius on sight. She would totally give him a chance.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Yes the grammar errors are the bane of my existance.

Thanks,

Paola


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