I really like the story. can't wait for the rest!

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needs more james/lily stuff... More fluff i guess!!

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WOW!!!!!!! oh, the story is so nice, will you have me was nice too. I have been waiting for a update please hurry, I just can't wait to see what will happen next. sorry took me a long time to review. PLEASE HURRY UP I JUST CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Awwww.... no more 2 read makes me very sad u need 2 update soon! Well plz check out my new (Nd premiere story as a writer posting 4 once! Im excited!) story! My co-writer nd i hope u enjoy it as much as i enjoy yours! (Ill make her read these two stories in her free time.) Just a better summary then the one posted..
Pairings: Lily/Lucius (Shocking huh?)
Lily/James (They end up together... Yeah!)
Remus/OC (Her name is Krystal... she has lots of secrets 2)
Sirius/OC (Her name is Michelle... her nd him have lots more in common than they think... nd she's a Slytherin!)
Severus/OC (Ha! *Laughs*Her name is Lexi (Alexis) nd these two were childhood friends... but times change and betrayls occur)
Lucius/Narcissia (Arranged mariage... but they are lovers previous to either's knowledge of this arrangement)

This story is one of a trilogy as mentioned probably b4! Im sry if these constant reminders are annoying but im scared as this is my preimere as a writer... to the world neway...i just wanna know ppl will read it nd like it... so try 2 check it out if we ever post... *sighs* but ill try 2 let ya know when it is... but back 2 u! Yeah ill definitely check out ur newer story Hp nd the Prophecy... Love this chap! Nd sadly ur right... in 'Potterverse' *Laughs...* Like the name u gave it by the way... ne ways it tis the end of ther lives they are headin 4! *cries* Well G2g UPDATE SOON!

Love ya lots

The Damsel

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Don't worry-- ill keep reading but if ur trying to keep this as close to Potterverse as u named it... a gentle reminder about having the second Potter in there somewhere... just so u remember nd dont get lost in writing the angst and drama of this story... some writers and myself included do it so i just thought id help ya out... oh nd have u herd of Nelly Furtado? Well (even if u don't really like her... plz concider this...) on her new CD 'Loose' is a song entitled "Wait For U" Track 11... if ne1 u know has it i recommend listening to it.. cuz it kinda applies to Amanda nd Lily in this part of ur story... sry if u didnt really care bout that last part but i thought id tell ya... Ne ways ur sequel is kick arse man! Love it!

X's nd O's

Keep it up

~Her Royal Highness The One And Only Damsel Herself~

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Hey Josh! In this little part of your story in this little chap u switch potters... *giggles slightly* Here it is so u can go back nd fix it...

"Harry turned to the witch beside him without looking to see if his instructions had been obeyed. ‘With me,’ he said as he made his way up the stairs. ‘You, check the house that there’s no one in here that shouldn’t be,’ he added to the last remaining member of the team. "

Well g2g

X's nd O's

The Damsel

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LOL i love chicken 2! My grandparents took me on an exploration out 2 the Black Hills of SD in the USA and i ate nothing... literally NOTHING but chicken... but u dont wanna hear bout that! Well i really like this story nd i hope 2 c lily nd friends again! Well g2g

X's nd O's

The Damsel

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I have heard recommendations on that story..or at least the title maybe 4 a diff story but ill check it out! I may have it on my fave's already but i dunno if i dont i will soon! Love this chap by the way!

X's nd O's

The Damsel

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This is a good story, but it's a little rushed. I would slow down and maybe add some more detail of the girls' perspective.

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Good chapter, but I think you made a mistake. Near the bottom, you wrote "Harry turned to the witch beside him..." I'm assuming you mean James, but I thought you might like to know! Anyway, good job.

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that was good but i don't think it was one of your best chapters

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it was really good

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it was really good :) you should think of a career in writing

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that as really cool


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it was really good


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Hey sirius doesnt die so it wont be the end of his life.........and what about James and Lily? They are getting married right?

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Wow. Wonderful wrap up to the year. SOmehow it seems oddly farmiliar...HBP, anyone? : 0 )- Great chapter--I love the joining the order straight off. Oh! Who's caught up? ME!! Haha! *Does a Dance* Now I get to wait for YOU!. HAHA


Author's Response: Note... this was written before HBP! Thus, Rowling copied me...

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Great summary of the year. It was a bit rushed, but most of the important information was in there. I love how you show that James is human...great job, all of it.

The only thing is homynyms...their there and they're...etc.

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Wow. Great scenes. I love how Dumbledore put James in charge and how the Weasleys were mentioned...Fudge I thought was accurate...great chapter. Although sad that he actually killed him.
James is a lot like Harry...

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Haha. Nice twist. The password in this chapter is well chosen--and well places. (" ‘I’ll tell you after some food ok? Patience.’ " ) That was great. Wonderful, General Prongzy! (HA HA HA. I'm hilarious, I know.)

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Wow. I can tell that this one is going to ba a lot darker--but it is still good sofar. I love the set up...and I think my parents would have agreed with the girls'...I would not have been allowed to run amok in a war strewn country at 16-27 either. : 0 ) Great chap!

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Harry turned to the witch beside him without looking to see if his instructions had been obeyed. ? I thought that this was a Marauder story .

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yayayayay james's leadership showing through!! I'm glad for that. Though I was thinking james seemed to have forgotten lily.... I thought he would be thinking of her a bit during his solitude times... hmmm.... well, great chapter!

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hahahahaha I could just smell the aroma of delicious roast chicken when I was reading the end part. mmmmmmmm..... yummmmyyy *mouth waters* =D

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I really like the direction your story is going! I read Will you have me? and had to come strait to this one. I am wondering when Lily is going to come in. We know from JK that Lily and James defied Voldemort 3 and they were married soon after Hogwarts. Again your story is amazing and one of my favorites. Can't wait till the next chapter. -Kels

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