You said in the last chapter that you'd changed Gemma's name from Rachael but you referred to her as Rachael at the beginning of this one.. just thought I'd point it out..

So I really LOVE this story so far, POA is my favourite of the books and I think it'll be really interesting to see what you're going to do with it and the girls. I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of the story :D

Len x

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Please say you'll finish this! I really like it so far. And watch out, you called Gemma Rachael a couple of times. But good name, Gemma. lol

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An interesting take on the story. I can't wait to see where you take this so please keep up the great work^_^
~hpjedi1

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I love that, "chasing her around my hut and trying to kiss her. And when yeh finally did, she cried and cried, thought she'd never stop"
Please update again soon!

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great chapter!!! cant wait 2 read more, so update soon!!

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hey, i just wanted to ask u to please continue writing this story cuz its really good, and id really like to see it finished.i also love ur continuation of the woode and wilde story

Author's Response: I am trying to work on it actually! But it's hard to keep up with three stories, so I switch up working on them! Thanks for the sincere concern though, that's cool that you like it so much. :)

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is this story still goin to b updated or abandonned? cuz last time i was here it was marked abandonned >.

Author's Response: erm, it's not totally abandoned, but I won't be working on it for awhile, as I'm focusing on other stories currently

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props on the amazing chapter you got here. I can't wait for a new one. It's really interesting, plus I wann know the secret that oliver finds out

Author's Response: thank you

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ah been so looong since u updated...=(

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hey
i love the story, but you havent updated in AGES! update!

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LOVED IT!!!! evan reminds meh alot of meh...well not the whole dad bein convicted of a pyscho murderer just shorter than most n shy n wat not...cant wait for next!!!

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LOVED IT!!!!!!!!

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Enjoying the Story, hope you are updating this soon x


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More would be amazingly appreciated! I loved the idea and the characters! Plus you have an AWSOME BANNER!

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ok you have to hurry up and update! Alyx is my favorite character I can't wait till she gets a guy...anyway I love her whole tomboy demenor and for shirt--

I LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON AND ALYX IS MY FAVORITE CHRACTER! lol

Author's Response: You're in serious luck, 'casue the chapter I'm working on has a lot to do with Alyx and her love life!

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This is rad. I seriously didn't think that this would be all that good, because the premise seems so trite, but you really pulled it off! Kudos! It is not only well-written, but the character development is awesome and well-rounded. I love Evan: I think she might be my favorite. Oops, playign favorites already! Haha, oh well. We'll continue this little ditty after the next chapter, yes? Update soon, luv...I can't wait! Go ahead and check out some of my stories if you wish: I dunno if they're your style, but we have a relatively similar writing technique, I think.

Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely, long review! Evan is special to me as well; I think I'm more like her than the other girls, so maybe that's why! ha ha

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I love this story!!! Your writing is really good and the characters are great. It's just awesome. Please, please, please update soon!!

Author's Response: Thank ya!

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Hi!!! I was just wondering when you were going to post some new chapters...because I really enjoy reading your Story. Besides you left us Hangin!!!

Author's Response: I'm baaaaaack! (And currently working on it)

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Your whole story is AWESOME! I've seen so many maruader stories, it's nice to see all of their kids (besides peter). It was a really good idea. I'm not trying to sound like a "crazed" fan or anything, but you haven't put a new chapter up for about p months! Pleaz put a new one up! thanx

Author's Response: I'm baaaack! I'm working on it!

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I lurve this story, please updaaaaaaaaaaaaaate!!!

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Great story. Please update soon. Evan is currently my favorite character :D

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So Cool! Plz cont.

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Once again, that was a great story, well what i have read so far. It was just awesome, just like your other two stories! (i dont understand why i am just now finding your stories?!)

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Hey, love the story!!! it great so far keep it up, adn post more soon!!! Well, MUCHO LOVE!!!!

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yay! i love it... but i wish the Evan would believe Sirius didnt kill anybody and didnt let poeple get to her about him...i mean seriously Sirius is the coolest!!! update soon..please?

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