Hmm. GREAT! I really liked how it all worked out! I'm assuming this means Remus is cured? That makes me so happy ! I never would've thought of having Phoenix tears cure something like that...Very creative!

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Wow! Great start! I really liked it! It seems really unique =) I'll go ahead and read the next chapter.

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i luv this its well great please reconsider abandoning it

Author's Response: I continue it at some point...but I'm concentrating on other stories at the moment.

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are you going to hurry it up the next chapter or what?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

Author's Response: sorry, I'd dropped this story for a bit in favour of my other story 'Black Panther', dur to your request I've started typing the next chapter though :-)

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ooooo i hate whaen authers leave us like that!!!! anyway awesome so get to writing more will you?!?!?!?!?!

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Oooh, romance! I like it. :D

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Hey, it's not necessary to have A/N's after every chapter. ;) Some readers don't like them. A suggestion I have is to try to length your chapters, with description, dialogue, or whatever. How long are you excepting to make this fiction?

Author's Response: It'll go on until I get fed up with it

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Good luck with your first fan fiction! Try forums or FAQ for how to get a banner up. I think you should get a beta- they're really useful. (I have one myself.) Other than that, good job! :)

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