Reading Reviews for Stand Still
3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by hptrump Midum

11th August 2005:
different start waiting to see more.

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Review #2, by Sara Midum

11th August 2005: was well written even if it was a bit weird. I think that the going back in time or memories should be really described so the reader knows what is going on. If I were you, I would take things slower and allow your story to sink in a bit, rather than scratch the surface.

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Review #3, by wompednimbus Privacy Please

28th July 2005:
nice story but it seemed like it happened all too fast but write more plz it was good!!!

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