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7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Sloanjennifer Tea?

19th December 2012:
going good keep it up

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Review #2, by Paloma Patil Shopping

27th December 2005:
I really like the asian couple with the giant baby named Dudley - that made me laugh out loud.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love your reviews, nevt chapter will, hopefully, be out soon.

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Review #3, by elfbwillow Shopping

22nd November 2005:
Oh - please the more chapters the better - it is brilliant. Oh - you asked for a banner - take a look at mine - if you like my style - I will gladly make you a banner if you tell me what you would like on it etc...

Author's Response: Thank you. I hit a dead end (I think I went crazy the first time I wrote it and the entire plot didn't work) but I'm back to working on the last chapter, this time with pretty much no plot. I'll get in touch with you about the banner. (I've been grounded for a while and was not allowed near my computer.) Thanks for the review!

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Review #4, by elfbwillow Tea?

22nd November 2005:
A brilliant first chapter - some really funny bits within it. Great!

Author's Response: Thanks sosososososo much, I'm having a bit of trouble with Iorning out the end of the story. thanks for the complament, I have been blessed with the gift of sarcasm. anyway, I love reviews, thanks!

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Review #5, by Psyche Shopping

2nd November 2005:
Lots of fun, this chapter. Btw I think the minister's name is Scrimegour. I await the next installment eagerly ^-^

Author's Response: oops, your right, i am a terrible speller and forgot to look it up while typing it, thanks.

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Review #6, by Psyche Tea?

2nd November 2005:
I love your writing! My brother has ADD too ^-^ Can't wait to read more, ~The Plotter

Author's Response: thank you, I'm not sure as to where the story is going from here so it may take me a while to update

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Review #7, by Paloma Patil Tea?

21st September 2005:
Oh, this is strong, Mermaid. There are a couple of terrific, laugh-out-loud lines, too. I loved: "they’re like a failed attempt to make dresses masculine" and I also thought that "she gets no extra points for alliteration" was pretty great, too. Keep it going, eh? A great start!

Author's Response: OMG! I have a review *does happy dance* Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!! I do plan on continuing this out to three chapters but am really buisy w/ school at the moment but i will hopefully get another out within the week. Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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