{reviewid: 2575133, reviewer: 'noname'}
21st August 2011:
is this 500 words? i think it looks shorter.
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{reviewid: 1553094, reviewer: 'blaze77'}
4th August 2007:
why are your chapters so short? 5/10
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{reviewid: 1535896, reviewer: 'BuckBeaktheHippogriff'}
27th July 2007:
That was awsome. I read the Holes book when I was in first grade and I did enjoy the book. I also enjoyed your story so far. Can't wait to read the rest! 10/10 :o) (oh and yay Texas!)
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{reviewid: 972200, reviewer: 'AnoynamousReviewer'}
| Review #4, by AnoynamousReviewer | Camp |
29th April 2006:
those little slashes are annoying but so far so good, dosen't butter bear make you warm? why would Harry want to get even hotter then he is at CGL
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{reviewid: 972179, reviewer: 'AnoynamousReviewer'}
| Review #5, by AnoynamousReviewer | Camp |
29th April 2006:
those little slashes are annoying but so far so good, dosen't butter bear make you warm? why would Harry want to get even hotter then he is at CGL
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{reviewid: 883736, reviewer: 'beckz4ron'}
31st January 2006:
hey this was a really good story and idea. the chapters were a bit fast moving though, jumping from one thing to the next, might have been better if you elaborated a bit more, oh and the formatting's a bit dodgy you've got slashes (/) everywhere, but the story its self was really good! well done!
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{reviewid: 602277, reviewer: 'StucknTraffic20052010'}
21st July 2005:
it was good, but i think it would have been better if you would have made the chapters longer and more detailed..but other than that--I loved it!
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{reviewid: 248033, reviewer: 'Anonymous'}
13th October 2004:
Wow... Um. I honestly dont know what to say about that chapter. I hope the other ones are better then this one.
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{reviewid: 160256, reviewer: 'Kirby%20Hilderbrand'}
| Review #9, by Kirby Hilderbrand | Good-Bye |
27th May 2004:
Funomonal!!!!!!
I loved it!
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{reviewid: 47547, reviewer: 'LTDan'}
27th June 2003:
Marvelous! Simply marvelous! :P I love \"Holes\" the book. The movie, like always, wasn\'t very good. But, I noticed your pen name said you loved Shia, so I\'ll be nice...hehe...
I found your writing quality to be promising, and I hope to hear more from you. :) I\'m not logged in, I know...that usually bothers me when I write and go read my reviews. Can\'t go compare my work to theirs! :P
*~LT. Dan~*
~Alexa~
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
:)
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{reviewid: 45421, reviewer: 'DemonKat'}
10th June 2003:
this is really good...:)
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{reviewid: 44552, reviewer: 'aline'}
3rd June 2003:
cool story.I like the book holes just as much as this one.
Please review my stories
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{reviewid: 42687, reviewer: 'Crystal'}
17th May 2003:
hmmm a good two chapters really but a rather lame Voldie
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{reviewid: 42271, reviewer: 'Crystal'}
15th May 2003:
you should stick some of those chapters together I mean geez there tiny!
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{reviewid: 42272, reviewer: 'Crystal'}
15th May 2003:
the harry/erika thing would be wayyy to weird! Really I mean gosh she\'s Voldies daughter. But I think it\'s cute for Harry to have a slight crush on her... but the relationship should never develop between them.
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{reviewid: 42599, reviewer: 'tomfeltonlvr637'}
15th May 2003:
this stories great...its interseting and kinda funny, i luv how @ the end u say \"harry felt the familiar pang of jelousy...\" thats just a really cool snetence lol. i can\'t wait to read more. :)
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{reviewid: 42621, reviewer: 'serpensortia'}
15th May 2003:
IT IS GOOD.
BUT WE NEED MORE RON AND HERMIONE
PLZ PLZ PLZ
I BEG YOU
:D
Oxxxxxx(======================>
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{reviewid: 42623, reviewer: 'iluvdanandshia'}
15th May 2003:
Hey everyone. I was just wondering, do you think I should keep the stanley/erica romance the way it is, or make it a little bit of harry/erica. i wasn\'t sure cuz after i typed the last chapter, i thought that a harry/erica would be an interesting twist (her being Voldie\'s daughter and such). Tell me what you think! thanks for the reveiws.
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{reviewid: 42582, reviewer: 'Willow'}
14th May 2003:
There are back again a hobbits tale! Naaa, great story! Please keep writing!
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{reviewid: 42585, reviewer: 'Willow'}
14th May 2003:
Ooooooooo, I love Sirius, (don\'t supose Remus could get a mention?)
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{reviewid: 42592, reviewer: 'serpensortia'}
14th May 2003:
write more
we need more Ron and Hermione
it is a must
the whole Harry Potter story is based around Him and Ron and Hermione
you need them
just a suggestion
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{reviewid: 42405, reviewer: 'serpensortia'}
13th May 2003:
more more more
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{reviewid: 42480, reviewer: 'Crystal'}
13th May 2003:
it\'s good very weird but good!
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{reviewid: 42400, reviewer: 'Kt'}
12th May 2003:
HI,
I like your story. I watched the movie holes but I havent read the book. Reveiw my story it is called Hermione and the pitiful, awful no good, very bad day. Please rate it and review it too. It is in the general section.
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{reviewid: 42404, reviewer: 'iluvdanandshia'}
12th May 2003:
thanks for the reveiws! I was wondering, cuz u know the peeps at Camp Green Lake all have really odd nicknames to show that they\'ve been accepted? wat should harry\'s nickname be? I\'ve been trying to figure some out, but all of em sound cheesy and stupid. HELP! PLEASE!
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