{reviewid: 1721710, reviewer: 'Hallie'}
22nd November 2007:
That was so cool, and sad. To Harry! *Lift ups a glass and takes a sip*
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{reviewid: 539259, reviewer: 'Rachel'}
10th June 2005:
all I can is......................
GOD I can't even say anything I am bawling to hard. *Runs out crying* *comes back in an hour later* Sorry about that but that was really sweet. That was also really good.
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{reviewid: 329227, reviewer: 'Marvolo'}
10th January 2005:
Interesting... I like how you keep in some things that are likely to be in Harry's sixth year. Very good so far, an intruiging beginning!
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{reviewid: 53852, reviewer: 'audrey'}
16th August 2003:
This story would be so much better if the grammar and spelling weren\'t horrendous.
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{reviewid: 37306, reviewer: 'Felicia%20Mal-Delis'}
21st July 2003:
You need to spell check your work. There\'s a lot of mistakes.
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{reviewid: 37301, reviewer: 'Felicia%20Mal-Delis'}
21st July 2003:
But he didn\'t live. lol.
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{reviewid: 52037, reviewer: 'alicat%20member%20of%20the%20hpffgp%28harry%20potter%20grammar%20police%29'}
17th July 2003:
Slytherin is spelled wrong this is breaking Section23b of the Grammar Hand Guide which clearly states that all House names must be spelled right or the story could face charges.
But I suppose I could let you off if you write more soon!
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{reviewid: 37231, reviewer: 'Lithing%20Grint'}
31st January 2003:
Hey, a quite good story.
But Harry wouldnt be that unselfish!!!
And well.... the end is not very believable.
But though a good story.
see ya, lithing
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{reviewid: 34591, reviewer: 'LeeWeasley'}
23rd December 2002:
That was soooo good!! I really enjoyed this one! It was such a sweet Draco/Hermione story! One thing ... need more spacing because some of the punctuation got confusing ..
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{reviewid: 33822, reviewer: 'cybershelb'}
19th November 2002:
omg. i have nothing to say. that was the best draco/hermione fan fic ever! i am speechless and crying.
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