WHAT?!!! you are thinking of quiting this fic? You can't do that! This fic is good, and i have been reading all the chapters! I really like Rae and Sirius, Francesca and Remus!

Author's Response: I know :( I don't like the style I've written it in, though. I'm thinking that I'm going to finish this one quicker than I was planning, or put off my ideas for a new story for a little while.

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I can't wait until you update!

Author's Response: Thanks!

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hey im likin the quizzes please update soon !

Author's Response: "Quizzes"? Hmm, not sure what you mean...

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a great story... i loved the belevable voices! cant wwait for more keep it coming!!

Author's Response: Haha, thanks Rachie

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wicked chapter! can't wait for more! by the way i'm remusrulz (incase your wondering)

Author's Response: Thanks!

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Sorry, I'm not logged in, but I really enjoy it so far! I wish you would just make the chapters a bit longer, but otherwise, it's great!

Author's Response: Yeah, I wish I would too. But I find myself making excuses/promises, or just getting writer's block. I'm trying to make them longer, my latest one was my longest yet.

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i don't believe this, that was it! do you realise how long i have been waiting for an update? you must write more, soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great chapter by the way

Author's Response: I know! I've been so busy with work, vacation, and catching up with friends. Bit of writer's block too. But I'm working on the next one, don't worry!

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FINISH YOUR AWESOME STORY!

Author's Response: I've been away and busy, but believe me, I'M ON IT! Much love, Fiona. <333

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Well done you included the fluff!! More soon please. X

Author's Response: Lol, I'm working on the next chapter right now. I should have it up by the end of this weekend.

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hey i am loving your fanfic even if you've only just posted three chapters so far. I really like your writing style - like that you write in paragraphs, not every author does that which is too bad. By the way the gradual realisation of Sirius and Rea is very interesting and i thought i should just add - Sirius is such a prat! Anyway update soon!

Author's Response: Lol, I'm glad I'm gathering fans. I love using suspense and cliff hangers so that when the time comes that they admit they like each other, it will be really exciting. I'm hoping to take it farther after that point aswell, working with other relationships. Thanks for the review! <3

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i like how you take on sirius' character-- most people see him as a smooth operator, but i like this little bit of flustered sirius very much!

Author's Response: Yeah, it was a fun chapter, lol. <3

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~Really Great.~

Author's Response: Thanks again for your review <3

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~Great Chapter. Sirius is such a guy.~

Author's Response: Lol, don't I know it. <3

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~Nice begining~

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nice.

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Wow!!!! That's all I can say. This story is great and I can't wait for the next part.

Author's Response: Thanks! <3

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I think the first chapter of your story is good, except when you mentioned Lucius Malfoy. I am pretty sure he wasn't at Hogwarts with the Marauders. Wasn't he supposed to be school when the Chambers was opened the first time.

Author's Response: Oh, that I'm not sure about. I just assumed he was since many other stories use him as a character. Thankyou for your correction and I'll go change that. <3

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great start can't wait for more

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Really good story so far! It's very funny on what they think and all of that, I really enjoyed how you wrote it!! Keep up the good work!!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks <333

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Wow i loved this! i wonder who screamed? i like your style of writing because some people write really..well they sort of seem to rush it and dont check over it but you write quite maturely, its great. its very interesting to have it from sirius and raes points of view. i hope we are going to get some fluff! but dont rush it because all the flirting and gradual realisation is really interesting to read. please post another chapter soon.

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch for your review. I'll definatley try to keep it slow. There will be fluff, I, being me, forgot to add that when making the story. Thankyou for reminding me. <3333

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Do update soon

Author's Response: I will certainly try to.

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Winky: Um,is this finished???????? DObby: cos it's in the fin-ned sect? Winky: Anyway, loved it!

Author's Response: No, there was a mistake. Something got messed up when I submitted it. Thanks <3

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i liked how u used the name kingsley and how u put background info about her while not making this a history lesson. keep up the work!

Author's Response: Thanks! <333

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