{reviewid: 2600524, reviewer: 'bella'}
10th October 2011:
i love this story! please keep writting...i can't wait to see your finish work and i love how you change and write from hermione and ron side :)
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{reviewid: 2600482, reviewer: 'Elisa'}
10th October 2011:
Very good.keep up the good work!
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{reviewid: 1354103, reviewer: 'shade_of_lovely'}
25th March 2007:
That was awesome! I hope you finish it sometime.
My only suggestion is to make the scenes longer and tell whose point of view it is written in
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{reviewid: 849813, reviewer: 'sealpamela'}
8th January 2006:
Great! Reread what you wrote I found alot of errors though.
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{reviewid: 849777, reviewer: 'sealpamela'}
8th January 2006:
This is getting good.
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{reviewid: 849750, reviewer: 'sealpamela'}
8th January 2006:
What the heck?!? This is insane.
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{reviewid: 849741, reviewer: 'sealpamela'}
8th January 2006:
What the heck?! How un-Hermione!
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{reviewid: 849726, reviewer: 'sealpamela'}
8th January 2006:
Poor Hermione.
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{reviewid: 849708, reviewer: 'sealpamela'}
8th January 2006:
You have so got me.
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{reviewid: 569609, reviewer: '%7E%2AMythicalStarz%2A%7E'}
29th June 2005:
A bit rushed but really a rather good chapter.
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{reviewid: 534127, reviewer: 'OneBlackRose'}
7th June 2005:
keep up the good work. i like the story but am in a bit of a muddle of whos veiwpoint its coming from. At first its ron and then it's narrated and then its hermione. Just to clear that.
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{reviewid: 368132, reviewer: 'EEkk%21%21'}
8th February 2005:
AAAAAAAhhhh! i really dont like Parvati and Lavendar!! EEk!!
Funny tho..
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{reviewid: 50269, reviewer: 'Anon'}
10th July 2003:
=P
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{reviewid: 46692, reviewer: 'Vera'}
19th June 2003:
Pleez write more. I cant wait this long. Oh and thanx 4 reviewin!!!!!!!!! lyl
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{reviewid: 46693, reviewer: 'Vera'}
19th June 2003:
OMG PEOPLE HERE ARE JUST SO FREAKING LAZY THEY DONT REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!! JUST WRITE MORE, CUZ IF U DONT THERE WILL BE NOTHING FOR ME TO REVIEW AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
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{reviewid: 44527, reviewer: 'VERA'}
3rd June 2003:
PLEEZ WRITE MORE.
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{reviewid: 42873, reviewer: 'Vera'}
19th May 2003:
KEEP GOING. UR DOIN GREAT. MORE MORE MORE.
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{reviewid: 42477, reviewer: 'Anon'}
15th May 2003:
keep going. hurry im dying here
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{reviewid: 42332, reviewer: 'outXthere'}
14th May 2003:
i dont think boys can be sluts.......sluts are female.......
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{reviewid: 42532, reviewer: 'vera'}
13th May 2003:
KEEP WRITING UR KILLIN ME HERE!!!!!!!! I wanna know wat happens. If other people don\'t review this story that\'s their problem. They don\'t know wat they\'re missin. I luv it, but does Harry really have to be a real slut????
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{reviewid: 42534, reviewer: 'Anon'}
13th May 2003:
hey its vera do u have a sn??? or email. Thanx 4 reviewing by the way.
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{reviewid: 42466, reviewer: 'Anon'}
12th May 2003:
its cool. i luv it. But the malfoy being nice thing is really freakin me out, but its still REALLY COOL.
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{reviewid: 42467, reviewer: 'vera'}
12th May 2003:
coool coool cool! Im anon 2! i luv it but it gets kinda confusing cuz u switch from 1st person to back. Oh yeah and i dont really get the deal. Draco will go out with lavender and parvarti and in exchange they will try to hook hermione up with ron. I dont get it. Dont lavender and parvati have to do all the work? or are they too slutty to care. read my fanfic about ron and hermione its called FINALLY. i know it sux but give me ideas.
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{reviewid: 42340, reviewer: 'slytherinsangel'}
11th May 2003:
i am reviewing my own fanfic because i have no reviews but that just mite b bcuz i just posted but anyway i like my story and i hope that you do too i work really hard on this story and i unfortunetly dont have a beta-reader to help me correct this so if u want to beta my stories just let me no by emailing me well i am going to go i really hope u like my story though lata
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