i love it is not horrible it awsome Report Review
here is a review totaly awsome awsome awsome Report Review
Sirius is my new best friend. He can have my bread pudding, i don't like it anyway. Now wheres my cookie?
6754/10 Report Review
awww i love it, its fluff but not too much fluff...i like your style of writing Report Review
Can i ask what the 2 e's mean? the L is for Lily, one E for Evan's so wat's the other for? Report Review
Sirius is an ass!!
You said cookies for all, where's my cookie?
~Sal1705Author's Response: here's your cookie *hands over cookie* thanks for the review Report Review
Just a suggestion, make something really good, or really bad happen on May 17th... MY BIRTHDAY! Please?
I love your story. Cookies.
~Sal1705Author's Response: alright!!! May 17th will now become a chapter! Report Review
The Sally-Monster made cookies and ate them!
~Sal1705Author's Response: thanks Report Review
Baby cousin is coming over on Saturday!!
~Sal1705Author's Response: thanks? why is that relevant to my story? jw? Report Review
~Sal1705Author's Response: no no cookie!
Muahahaha, too soppy for Sally-Monster, who wants her cookie!
But it's great anywayz.
~Sal1705Author's Response: what's too sloppy? Report Review
I'm not going to tell you who I am, it already says it up the top!Author's Response: ok??? Report Review
People shalt die!
~Sal1705Author's Response: whom shalt die? Report Review
Urgh, I wanted to go to bloody bed and now I need to find out what happened!
Meanie poo bum bum head! I want a cookie!
~Sal1705Author's Response: lol i like the meanie poo bum bum head... it made me giggle in delight
~Sal1705Author's Response: *sigh*
Gawk. what a weird word!
~Sal1705Author's Response: i like the word gawk Report Review
Muahahahaha, crazyy leetle Sally-Monster wants a bloody cookie... I mean, a bloody choc-chip cookie!
~Sal1705Author's Response: sorry all out of choc-chip cookies Report Review
What was with this:
Lily kissed her, and when he pulled away, he licked his lips.
Urmm, has Lily turned Bi now? :P
~Sal1705Author's Response: thanks i figured out my error! Report Review
The Sally-Monster wants cookies!
~Sal1705Author's Response: oh well Report Review
~Sal1705Author's Response: that's what she said! Report Review
LoL, Stop making me laugh, it hurts! I broke 2 ribs water skiing a month ago. (They're all better now but it still hurts to laugh, the one thing I do best!)
~Sal1705Author's Response: ouch..... Report Review
That made me laugh!
~Sal1705Author's Response: me as well :D Report Review
COOKIEZ FOR SALLY-MONSTER?
~Sal1705Author's Response: no :P Report Review
Hehaw... What am I?
YOU GOT IT WRONG!!!
I'm a Sally-monster!
~Sal1705Author's Response: er... ok Report Review
Urgh! My story is gonna suck when I post it!! :(
Royal Blue would clash... with just about evrything to do with Lily, so would silver. Black suits just about anyone... So if you had to change it the black would be the best option!! :DAuthor's Response: that's unfortunate for your story :D *evil laugh* and i think royal blue works well with red hair thanks very much... as well as silver... black... so traditional and not lily... she's not like that..... Report Review
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