{reviewid: 2695232, reviewer: 'jada.caron'}
9th May 2012:
write more this is awesome
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{reviewid: 2280575, reviewer: 'EmptySh3ll'}
7th January 2010:
I like this idea, you should continue writing it. Although the characters are a little OOC, I don't mind at all. I want to see how it will progress.
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{reviewid: 1975078, reviewer: 'Karkaroff'}
27th October 2008:
This is a cool idea and I feel bad for Hermione. Thanks for writing.
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{reviewid: 1777365, reviewer: 'alicia'}
4th January 2008:
i think draco should start seducing mione, and they have sex and ron and harry get mad at her but she doesn't care. or somethin like that. i loved your story it was good
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{reviewid: 1514343, reviewer: 'bethy'}
14th July 2007:
This is going great!
Not for Hermione, but the story in general.
I can't wait for a new chapter.
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{reviewid: 1512358, reviewer: 'kyster'}
13th July 2007:
ron and harry are being such jerks
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{reviewid: 1429653, reviewer: 'ColorMyWorld'}
23rd May 2007:
I like this story and cannot wait for more! What is this challenge...? Write, Write, Write. Please? :)
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{reviewid: 1347325, reviewer: 'moongirl'}
19th March 2007:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I really want to read more of this story!
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{reviewid: 1299488, reviewer: 'Jennifer'}
8th February 2007:
Can you make the next one now I am curious what happens next?
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{reviewid: 1235479, reviewer: 'the_slytherin_goddess1509'}
20th December 2006:
please add a new chapter soon
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{reviewid: 1112094, reviewer: 'amy'}
21st August 2006:
please write more! i love this story!!!! please please please put the next chapter up!
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{reviewid: 1107177, reviewer: 'princessdannii'}
17th August 2006:
This story is really good you ought to add some more chapters.
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{reviewid: 1107176, reviewer: 'princessdannii'}
17th August 2006:
This story is really good you ought to add some more chapters.
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{reviewid: 1070209, reviewer: 'unknown'}
20th July 2006:
this is a great story i love it update ASAP
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{reviewid: 1000948, reviewer: 'Innocence_Lost'}
26th May 2006:
update, please!
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{reviewid: 985406, reviewer: 'Naive'}
13th May 2006:
What challenge? Any ways i love the story hope you update soon =)
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{reviewid: 984613, reviewer: 'Bitter_Sweet_Love62'}
12th May 2006:
What no way u cant leave it like that!!! oh please update asap!! that was an awesome story really expressive!
“ You should really watch these trick stairs, ” Ron commented.
Gah!!! if he said that to me!! i would get a baseball bat and hit him so hard in the face till it looks even worse than it already was!!! lol soz i dont like ron!
Zoe xx keep up the great work
Rating 9/10
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{reviewid: 984299, reviewer: 'Karma101'}
12th May 2006:
what challenge pl sudpate soon its reely good!
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{reviewid: 983355, reviewer: 'JESI'}
10th May 2006:
PUT UP THE NEXT CHAP. OR ELSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 982882, reviewer: 'birdsong'}
10th May 2006:
Well, you've got my curiosity peaked. What was Hermione's demand? What is the challenge? I think you've captured everyone's character, even having Harry wonder if something is wrong. Write more soon!
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{reviewid: 982861, reviewer: 'Draco_89'}
10th May 2006:
Love this story! Hate Ginny and Lavender, and the way Harry and Ron are acting! UPDATE soon!!
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{reviewid: 982857, reviewer: 'xxlaura'}
10th May 2006:
i have no idea what you have planned for this story, but it sounds amazing. i can't wait for further chapters! keep up the good work. ♥ laura
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{reviewid: 982816, reviewer: 'ashley5895'}
10th May 2006:
i like it i cant waity for more!! write more as soon as possible!! Hermione should est ditch the harry and ron and be on her own!! thats what i would do. anyway write more soon love it!!!
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{reviewid: 944247, reviewer: 'dramioney'}
19th March 2006:
*Sad, lonely and depressed Hermione.*
Can't wait to see how Draco uses all the new development, I can just about imagine an even more crueller Malfoy than ever.
Is the Mind elixir relevant to the story later on or was it just a passing topic in class?
All though the story feels like there are blackout moments up until a scene of importance, you've got a good story going.
No spelling mistakes that I've noticed as I read, kinda saddend by having only 2 chapters, though got into the sadness you portrayed Hermione's character fairly quickly.
I just hope you keep updating..and soon
Author's Response: It might be another sub-plot... Eh, I feel that too. But the fic is going under some renovation and I think I will edit some things in and take some things out. Hermione's charrie is kinda hard to capture, but thanks for the review!
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{reviewid: 874879, reviewer: 'Ali'}
25th January 2006:
The endin ruined it!
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