Great chapter again! I can't wait to see what happens next. You have a amazing imagination and great talent for written words. Keep it up!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, really your words are insperation to continue. I'm working on it, but lately I've been really busy. Yet I'll get a chapter out by the end of the month promise.

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excellent, of course.

Author's Response: thank you, mate!!!

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It's very intriguing and has great possiblities, though I kept getting distracted by some grammar problems--'possible' when it's supposed to be 'possibly', but those can be fixed if you'd give it a few reads yourself to proof it.

Author's Response: Well thanks for reading it, and when I post the next chapter, I'll fix those mistakes. . .

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Okay, you asked me to read and I did. Let me just tell you...that was amazing! I am adding this to my favorites!!! I was completly engrossed in your writting. Your descriptions and flow of the story are amazing! The plot looks VERY promising and I can't wait to read more!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!!!! Yeah I like it too, obviously. . . and your tecnically my first review-- hope there's more. You fic's on my favorites too, so that's a little weird in a way. . .

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excellent. this has improved beyond reasonable measure... you need to continue this!

Author's Response: Thanks, Aziz, we'll have to get together soon-- like tomorrow!!!!

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