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Review #1, by Jessie C. Welcome to Parenthood Harry

25th December 2009:
Haha..cute ending... i liked it!!!

Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you liked it!

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Review #2, by Alopex Welcome to Parenthood Harry

30th October 2009:

Haha, this story was hilarious! The ending, which normally wouldn't have been all that funny, did seem quite funny after the rest of the story. I can only imagine Harry's very first thought upon hearing the news. Also the "Accio diapers" had me alternately cringing and cracking up. Hoo boy, so much for thinking ahead! He sure got into all sorts of pickles in this story.

This is the oldest story on your page (though I admit I didn't check the date, it seems to be pre-DH), and I think the only other thing I've read of yours was a Staff Challenge piece, so I can't really compare it to your later work. However, given that this is the oldest story, it stands to reason it might be a little rough around the edges. I did notice a few little mechanics things: some missed capitalization, borage (which is a plant) instead of barrage, and a couple other minor things. Mostly some choppiness in the writing. Nothing too distracting, though, because the humor distracted me from everything else!

I bet a lot of parents wish they could use magic to clean up messes like Harry did! In fact, I bet most of us would like to be able to clean up messes magically, no matter whether the messes are baby-generated or self-generated. Harry's just lucky he could perform all those spells, is all I have to say about that. Oh, and I also thought the bit about Harry trying to cook the Muggle way was a very good, amusing touch.

Author's Response: It is quite the old story four years to be exact. (So yes VERY pre DH) I have to say I'm glad to hear that it can't be compared to my most recent work! It tells me that I am improving! Though I really should add this story to the list of stories to revamp. It was published under a rather rough edit.

Despite the choppiness of it and the rough edges I am glad that you still enjoyed the tale and the story still communicated well. The humor has always been something I love to dabble into write and I'm glad that I was able to capture that for you enough to distract from my old errors.

I have to agree with you that magic would make things easier in some cases I just hope I was able to express that sometimes magic isn't what it's all cracked up to be because half the mess wouldn't exist if magic wasn't used.

Over all, thank you so much for the review it really brought a smile to my day! I had been thinking how this fic needed some love once more. Hopefully I can get around to a revamp of this story as well.

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Review #3, by AHeat Welcome to Parenthood Harry

23rd April 2008:
I like the surprising twist at the end.. very well written, and a very cute story!

Author's Response: Thank you that was one of my favorite parts. Thank you for the compliments!

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Review #4, by kingbobrules Welcome to Parenthood Harry

23rd April 2007:
A great bit of fluff!

Author's Response: Thanks... this fic was a ton of fun to write.

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Review #5, by hogwarts_girl_5 Welcome to Parenthood Harry

24th January 2007:
omg!! ginnys pregnant again?? thats soo kool!! and poor harry!! double the trouble!! but it mite be a girl...cant wait to read!!

Author's Response: Yeah, the idea is that it would be a girl.. this is a one shot, and I don't see myself writing more later on... I just lack the inspirartion for more. Thank's for the review though!

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Review #6, by sariesarie Welcome to Parenthood Harry

31st December 2006:
great ending. write more. GREAT

Author's Response: Thank you... I don't know if I'll write more of this. I think this is the end seeing as the muse seems to have left me for this genre... I seem to be writing more Marauder era fics.

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Review #7, by obsessive Welcome to Parenthood Harry

11th December 2006:
Aww! It's so sweet. I like Sirius. He's so cute. You should write another one about there being two kids.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review... I've been told that a number of times... my muse for such a fic is sort of short. But I keep toying with the idea in the back of my head. Once I find the perfect plot I'll more than likely set to work on it.

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Review #8, by unknown Welcome to Parenthood Harry

28th October 2006:
Good Story!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #9, by ILoveLost1888 Welcome to Parenthood Harry

22nd October 2006:
Wow. How old is Sirius?? I hope it is a girl. Can you name her Evangeline Carrie Potter ir it is a boy Rondal Aurthur Potter???? I like when you said. What? Why? asked a confuesd Harry, "You 're not sick are you?" asked Harry " No Harry, I'm pregnant!" said happyley Ginny!! Keep going u!!! ^_^ ^.^

Author's Response: Oh gosh... I had an age in mind when I wrote it I think he's about 24months, cause if I ever wrote Sirius and his sister in Hogwarts she would be in the year just under him. Her name is Lillian. Thanks for the review! (Though I have vague concepts of Sirius and Lillian.. I don't think I will take to writing them... I don't have much inspiration to do such.)

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Review #10, by Charmed_Im_Sure Welcome to Parenthood Harry

18th October 2006:
oh my god cool ending on funny story 10/10


Author's Response: Thanky you so much! This was one of my favorite fics to write!

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Review #11, by brokenheart Welcome to Parenthood Harry

8th June 2006:
oh damn!!!

another child!!!!

Author's Response: Not to worry the two handel their second child quite well it's just Sirius who you have to watch out for. ;-)

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Review #12, by LondonChic17 Welcome to Parenthood Harry

17th May 2006:
Yay!!!!!!!! What's next a..... James/Remus??????????

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it.... honestly I gave it some thought and if I were to write more, I would have this second baby be a girl so the name would be Lillian. And as aditonal information, baby Sirius' full name is Sirius James Potter.

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Review #13, by Violet Snape Welcome to Parenthood Harry

30th April 2006:
Thats the funniest thing I have ever read it was great but poor Harry.

Author's Response: Yes poor Harry... but so much fun... glad you liked my fic! Thanks for the review!

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Review #14, by Seamusfan1 (Not signed in) Welcome to Parenthood Harry

17th April 2006:
This is so cute! I love it! Very funny-I can see an older and married up...haha. Great job! Cute ending!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it... Thank's for the review!

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Review #15, by piper15 Welcome to Parenthood Harry

13th February 2006:
That defiantly deserved to be in the humor category. I loved it. Especially the ending. So cute and so ironic. I didn't even see it coming. That was so good. Keep writing.

Author's Response: Thank's so much! I am so glad you loved it. I wondered if the ending was a suprise or not, I was hoping it was a suprise. Thank's for the review!

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Review #16, by PAT Welcome to Parenthood Harry

4th September 2005:

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad I was able to make you laugh.

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Review #17, by Urvi Welcome to Parenthood Harry

19th August 2005:
Another baby? Wohoo! They're really working it! made Harry and Ginny seem really sweet and together and I liked that. You kept Sirius alive, too, way to go. Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you, It was a lot of fun writing Harry and Ginny. As for Sirius... he is actualy still dead. That is why the baby is named Sirius. I thought it sweet and meaningfull to name the baby after him, that and the kid's pesonality just seemed to match.

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Review #18, by vika_malfoy Welcome to Parenthood Harry

14th August 2005:
This is a good fanfic!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!

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Review #19, by Potterville Welcome to Parenthood Harry

13th August 2005:
Ha ha ha that's funny.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!

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Review #20, by flutterby Welcome to Parenthood Harry

12th August 2005:
hahaha, i loved it! awesome, awesome, awesome! it was so funny and yet believable too! poor harry...i loved the way you wrote it! great job!

Author's Response: I'm glad I hit on the believability aspect of it all. Glad you liked it, thank's so much for the review.

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Review #21, by Yiva Potter Welcome to Parenthood Harry

10th August 2005:
one word: funny! I love the problems Harry was having with Sirius! Poor Harry, that's the way I imagine Harry would act with a small child, kind of like I think James would act....:-) Are you going to write a fic about Ginny having the baby, sort of a follow up, or was this just a one time deal? I really liked this, and I am looking forward to reading more of your writings soon, when I can get the time. I loved this! ~Yiva

Author's Response: I've thought about a follow up fiction, but I'm not sure if I will. No ideas for the follow up realy come to mind. But if they do I will be sure to write them. Thank's for the review and I'm glad you liked my fic.

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Review #22, by ??? Welcome to Parenthood Harry

9th August 2005:
nice ending. 10

Author's Response: Thank you.

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Review #23, by alex r. Welcome to Parenthood Harry

9th August 2005:
that story was really funny.i feel sorry for harry though!LOL

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you like the fic.

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Review #24, by bluegirl Welcome to Parenthood Harry

9th August 2005:
That was really good and funny! I really enjoyed it!!! I wonder what his expression is? Oh, and nor should be not (second to last sentence). Good job!!!-blue

Author's Response: I will be sure to fix that, thank's for pointing that out to me.

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Review #25, by Tiger_Cruise_Ginny (not signed in) Welcome to Parenthood Harry

6th August 2005:
wonderful!!! I love it. it's so cute

Author's Response: Glad you liked it.

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