265 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Emily Jessica and Joshua Malfoy

7th July 2013:
Story flow was terrible. The plot was all over the place and you threw in drama when you could've kept the story going. In need of much improvement.

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Review #2, by Emily Not draco?

7th July 2013:
Yeah total plot jump from four to five wth

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Review #3, by jada.caron Jessica and Joshua Malfoy

9th May 2012:
write more it is awesome so far

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Review #4, by Angelica Not draco?

8th February 2012:
Um i think you skipped an entire chapter, what happened when he got to Blaise's and heard screaming?? You lost me, this sucks now. See ya.

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Review #5, by Sheewa Ghobadi Jessica and Joshua Malfoy

21st August 2011:
I love how the story leaves you hanging! 9 Stars!

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Review #6, by emmykat113 Jessica and Joshua Malfoy

12th July 2009:
How Could You? *slaps you and starts crying* it's- sniffle- a - blows nose- a clifhanger! Wahhh 10/10

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Review #7, by :-/ Not draco?

22nd May 2009:
I really like the idea and the way this story line is going, but you really need to get yourself a beta.

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Review #8, by Isa_bell Jessica and Joshua Malfoy

6th March 2009:
Wow it's good! Is there going to be a sequel? It sounded like that wasn't the end.

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Review #9, by LangstonWeasley Jessica and Joshua Malfoy

28th October 2008:
this story was ok...but the ending doesn't work well.

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Review #10, by dracolover7 Jessica and Joshua Malfoy

25th March 2008:
IT IS REALLY GOOD YOU DID A WICKED JOB NOTHING TO ADD FOR YOU TO CHANGE JUST KEEP GOING IM LOVING IT

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Review #11, by sparkle15 Jessica and Joshua Malfoy

27th January 2008:
Oh my gosh. What will happen to their daughter? The ferret reference is hilarious!

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Review #12, by FAieryGal Jessica and Joshua Malfoy

7th January 2008:
This is a great story and the plot is good. I think you shood put more of the characters' emotions in it. How is Draco really feeling about all this? What's going to happen to baby Jessica? Can't wait for the rest of the story to continue.
Sincerely,
FAieryGal

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Review #13, by PureSlytherinSpite Jessica and Joshua Malfoy

21st December 2007:
ok ...
dnt get that vampire ting your talkin bowt ...

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Review #14, by sexyredrose How it all started/prolouge

13th November 2007:
hmmm intretsing

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Review #15, by sexyredrose reason

12th November 2007:
too soon to tell if i like it but it did draw me in

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Review #16, by sirius blacks gurl Jessica and Joshua Malfoy

28th October 2007:
sequel???
10/10

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Review #17, by sirius blacks gurl Ginny Weasley

28th October 2007:
wow...(that's a good wow :P)
srry if it comes up 2x

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Review #18, by animal lover Jessica and Joshua Malfoy

19th July 2007:
loved it! is done are you writtinging a seqeal?

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Review #19, by dgirl555 Jessica and Joshua Malfoy

3rd July 2007:
It says the story is finished. Is there a sequel?

*Daniele*

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Review #20, by dgirl555 reason

3rd July 2007:
OK... first of all, WHAT'S WITH ALL THE LINKS!?

Second of all, the characters are VERY out of character. Well, except Ron.

*Daniele*

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Review #21, by Addicted2Draco Jessica and Joshua Malfoy

21st June 2007:
is there a sequil coming?

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Review #22, by dracolover Jessica and Joshua Malfoy

22nd April 2007:
there should be a sekel because you leave ppl left on a hill between falling and coming back!

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Review #23, by harrypotterrocks13 Jessica and Joshua Malfoy

28th February 2007:
please update soon!

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Review #24, by Shelley Jessica and Joshua Malfoy

4th February 2007:
It's done? Aw.

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Review #25, by TheFalk What were you hiding?

29th December 2006:
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that was akward and could have been put into better words to make it more romantic but what ever..

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