39 Reviews Found

Review #1, by KitKat love isnt enough

11th July 2005:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!.......okay, that's it.....*grabs pitchforks and torches and hands them to random people*.....were going sl*t hunting!.......*chases Pansy*.........i'll go read the sequil now..........

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Review #2, by KitKat The road to friendship

11th July 2005:
.........hehe........i "own" one of my guy-friends.......yup.....they don't like it very much when their hitting on some girl and i tell the girl that they have to "fill out the appropriate forms before they get "involved" " .......when they ask "why".......i'm like......." 'cause i own his a**".......hehe......then comes the whole "were just friends" speech.......yup......he gets pissed off........but HEY, it IS my job.........hehe.........yup.....GREAT chappie............everything is working out.....'cept Pansy......but she's a bimbo.......she'll forget what she was doing before anything happens.......hehe.......

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Review #3, by KitKat The truth is out

11th July 2005:
it was a good chappie....i liked the whole truth-telling potion....i always LOVE stories with it.....maby you could do a one-shot where a whole lotta people drink it......it'd be funny....anywho, i can name up to 20 kinds of cheese.. theres cheddar, swiss, parmashan, kolby jack,........*rambles on for a while listing cheeses*........okay........

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Review #4, by Kitkat Harrys Betrayed

11th July 2005:
FINE!!!!!!!!...........she's in some deep <<tag not allowed="red">tag not allowed="red">censored.........yup........just don't kill off Harry or anything.......seriously......DON'T!......

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Review #5, by KitKat The plan backfires

11th July 2005:
YES!!!......THE ONLY WAY TO SAVE OUR RELATIONSHIP IS FOR YOU TO GO OUT WITH ANOTHER MAN!!!!!!.........riiiiight......... good chappie..........

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Review #6, by KitKat the new girl

11th July 2005:
...........soooooo.........how'd Voldie-wart get into Hogwarts?!?!?!.............hey........Lord Dillusional talks to himself........hehe........

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Review #7, by KitKat hermonie falls in love

11th July 2005:
.......hehe.....ron said "yo, yo"........*laughs*.....geees......there ya go movin' fast again.......who was watching them?!?!?!?.....pervy......anywho, good chapter.......

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Review #8, by KitKat the kiss

11th July 2005:
................um..........okay.......did she like him before and that's really what she called him up there for or did it just strike her then?!?!?!........sooooo.........is it okay to go from this one to the sequel (after the 8th chapter)?!?!?.........'cause in the summary it says it's not compleated..........lemme know or i'll have to go read another one of your stories till i figure it out!!!!!!......btw.....i LOVE hermione/Draco fics!!!!....i just hope it dosn't move this fast ALL the time .....j.k.......

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Review #9, by dylanlover(artielover) The road to friendship

11th May 2005:
awsome! keep writing!

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Review #10, by Simon The plan backfires

29th March 2005:
Look, I know you are trying to create a dramatic love triangle and all, but this is inconsistent and a peice of trash. Harry was going out with Ginny, correct? And what was that bit about saving a relationship? What was wrong with it?

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Review #11, by Simon the kiss

29th March 2005:
Yeah, this absolutely sucks.

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Review #12, by Simon hermonie falls in love

29th March 2005:
Hmmm, a tad desperate is she not? Does she want love life so badly that she'll bang anyone willing? This is sooooo unrealistic! It's almost as if you are dying to write an R rated scene so badly you don't care if the story is actually GOOD! I hope this gets better later!

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Review #13, by Areida Rivers hermonie falls in love

20th February 2005:
I'm sorry..but it's so unbelieveable. One second she hates him and the next she's sleeping with him. By the way, she is never called 'Mione. And certainly not Monie.

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Review #14, by Areida Rivers the kiss

20th February 2005:
Umm...no. (1) If you want to have DracoHermione, you've got to make it more believeable. There has to be more character development than "Omg, my life sucks and Draco is hot." That's just not Hermione. (2) Spellcheck. It will improve the quality of your story tenfold. (3) There should be a new paragraph every time another character speaks, and please lose the slashes. (4) A beta is never a bad thing. I've got one and she's awesome. I'm serious, they can pick out mistakes you would never know were there--my beta does it all the time. Please don't take this as a flame, becuase flames are just lazy and I'm trying to give you some honest, constructive feedback. Good luck ^_^

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Review #15, by burningflame the kiss

17th January 2005:
This story has good potential, but there are a couple of things....First, some people may see the little slashes, / between peoples words to be annoying. Maybe you should consider just skipping a line between what the people say. It's a better way of doing it and easier to read. You have some spelling mistakes, like capitalizing your words in the beginning of sentences. And if you made the chapters longer then they would be easier to read. But if you fix some of these things then you will have a good story going on. Not that it isn't good already, but it will be even better. Keep writing!

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Review #16, by Lil\'Kit Z the kiss

16th August 2003:
very good story so far. your sticking well with your story on ddraco and hermione. u r doing well with grammer. i saw very little grammer mistakes. your cliffhangers are put in a very well postion where the readers have an eurg to read on. you have very good twist and and unexpected surprises. good with the humor, not alot but, good jokes.

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Review #17, by Kaily the kiss

11th August 2003:
Hey! This story\'s great so far. -Kaily

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Review #18, by ILUVTOM(megan) the kiss

19th June 2003:
write more ASAP

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Review #19, by emily the kiss

7th June 2003:
i would have never thought hermione and draco well it is very interesting nice one

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Review #20, by moi~ the kiss

5th June 2003:
Hey. Your story just really needs spell check. it\'s practically screaming for it. It\'s going too fast too. I\'d advise and suggest that you slow it down. Your story is okay, but has common misspelled words and grammer. it\'s off to a potential start!

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Review #21, by Baby Goo Goo 2 the kiss

1st June 2003:
It was good and don\'t stop writing -BGG2 P.S.-has anyone ever noticed the way Hermione just cring some times over stupid things in hpfanfics? i\'m not talking about yours though so don\'t take it personaly though!

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Review #22, by Baby Goo Goo 2 the kiss

1st June 2003:
Another P.S.-Can you just have where pansy and Hermione just start fighting. I mean REALLY fighting.

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Review #23, by SilverMirror the kiss

31st May 2003:
It\'s bit fast, yet a very cool story. I look forward to the sequal.

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Review #24, by Anon the kiss

31st May 2003:
That waz mean leaving it there....:(....kool idea giving a preview tho. o and just so u no it\'s \'shook\' not \'shock\'

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Review #25, by Rose the kiss

31st May 2003:
oops!! srry, 4got 2 put my name on the last 1. Anon. waz me haha!!

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