hi again ronny! don't know if you remember me, but i'm back from a long long vacation from HPFF! seeing how your story was doing (and my banner :P) and great story! if you need more banners, let me know!Author's Response: wow! it's great to hear from you! i will most definately get back to you if i need any more banners!! Report Review
well u sucj update but i don't blame u if u don't...man i really wish there was a carlos at our school...or maybe there is...hummAuthor's Response: sry i haven't updated for awhile! i will try to get back on the ball as soon as i possibly can!~AmericanRonnyBabe Report Review
i wonder who jae is....AMrita owned her anyways..!lolol!
soul sistaaaAuthor's Response: sure......yes,well jae is character, no matter how much amrita rox. and one guess who jae is...hehe.
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kids from Esperanza are really death eater spies......too bad we're goin there! hahha . this your biggest fan and she's pissed cuz she cant write like you...she'd do best writing humorous fics about the marauders.......more like her fiance Sirius......Guess whoo i M....thsi is hella good kid...i had to reread it wen my otha fic finished. much loveee....
like u dont kno who this is....
soul sistaaaaAuthor's Response: do u have an idea who you r? hmmm. i can't guess. well, they r death eater spies. all of them r. she can write like me if u try and she should try to write a marauders fic, no matter how much it mite stink. jk. thnx for ur review!
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yeah sharon updated..or have i just not been readind in a while? either one i finally read it.. very good now just keep on writing lol Report Review
lovely story! and a lovely banner if i do say so myself... haha jk.Author's Response: of course it is a lovely banner! it was made by the most wonderful and might i add talented banner maker EVER! haha, i might he asking for ur help again one day...very soon! thnx for the review!~AmericanRonnyBabe Report Review
Akk, it messed up my review. Mmkay
So yea, you described yourself really well, and uh. ^_^ i forgot whatelse I wrote in the review so um... Yea.
Lets just say, it was reaaaaaaaaly good. And I messed up Carlos' name in the last review so ignore that too :) Report Review
YUM. YUMMY CHAPPIE!!
Harry is so... Cold. Distant. You like that don't you? You want Harry for yourself. Goshh. HES MINE. *insert evil laugh* You can have Rupert tho. (Referance to the "Harry, mate, that Jae, she is quite fit") Hes YOURS. I'm keeping Felton (Felton, Tom Felton).
Anywho, I'm happy dear old Ginny is jealous. Its gonna be one of her last emotions as I kill her. Yes, yes I still am. Report Review
Its Drakie isn't it? Mmmkay. Bastard. Killing Dumbledore and all. Well Snape did that.
Anyways, what happened to the dementor? And is Ron confounded or something of the sort?
Great Chappie!! Report Review
Ooooh, so why does 'the voice' want Jae dead?
Lets kill him to along with Ginny. Much Fun. Report Review
JIN JU (Author's Response: u guessed it! hehe it is jin ju in a way! darn i should have named jae-hee jin ju! saranghae! thnx for ur review! ~AmericanRonnyBabe Report Review
!!!!!!!! DAMN! HOW DARE SHE! Lemme kill her? Please?? Can I take a cleaver and cut/chop/bash her head off?
Calos sounds HOTT. ( Report Review
He pulled out a pair of dark aviator sunglasses that he had stolen from his father’s muggle collection and slipped them on. He crossed his somewhat scrawny arms over his chest and fixed a look of “meathead” bodyguard on to his face, jutting his bottom lip out and hunching his neck over.
Nice. ^_^ You used your school? Um. Thats interesting. Anyways its goood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YUPP! :) I can't write reviews so try and live with them mmkay?
Oh one question, when did Harry&Co decide to go back to Hogwarts? If I misread, I'm sorry. But was it when the new Headmistress came for Harry he decided?Author's Response: yup that wen he decided it..also the sunglasses joke was an inside joke between me, my sis, and her fiance. yea. thnx for ur review!~AmericanRonnyBabe Report Review
Oh god. Ginny, poor Ginny. But I can't really imagine her running off crying, it doesn't seem like her behavior. Yet, we know hardly anything about her anyways so its good all the same. Report Review
AIYA! Guess who it is? ME ME ME! ^_^ The same girl who stayed at your house for several days :)
Great so far, Imma review every chappie to get you like a billion reviews. Anyways I feel so bad for Harry, I like the way you made the train ride so... iono. Good? Aunt Petunia just seems bitchy, lemme go push her into a mirror, it'll be fun.Author's Response: no, we haff to save that for a certain someone ^.^ thnx for ur review!~AmericanRonnyBabe Report Review
First of all, I LOVE this story. Keep writing. But I noticed that in chapter 8, that you wrote "Harry forgot about the pain in his hands and deftly swept up Hermione’s wand as it rolled toward him, keeping his eyes trained on the back of Malfoy’s head." 2 times. But still it is good.I have one question though, while all this stuff is going on, where is everyone else on the train? I was just wondering. Besides that, it was a good story and I hope that Harry does end up being with Jae. Because I don't like Ginny that much. But if they dont get together thats fine too. Carlos sounds hot to me, by the way and i bet he is going to be with Ginny ,but what does it matter what i think? Anyway, its a great story. i am adding it to my favorites.Author's Response: omigosh!!! thnx for adding this to ur favorites! u don't no how much that really means to me! *muah muah* thnx so much!!! and thnx for ur corrections. i'll keep in mind ur opinions, but who will end up with harry....it just has a mind of its own. people on the train r being oblivious, abandoned corridor, maybe i didn't make it clear. *sowie* lol and my friend thinks carlos is hot too. ^.^ keep reading and thnx for ur review!~AmericanRonnyBabe Report Review
and now the story ends
thats all folks!
~TonksAuthor's Response: dun dun duhh!! and psh i'll write more! jeez woman (if u r indeed a woman? do u swing that way? jk lol) don't worry, eighth will be up too! lol thnx again!~AmericanRonnyBabe Report Review
KILL JAE KILL JAE!!!
Ah the agony, ah the pain
im getting some bandaides!
~TonksAuthor's Response: jae has just been dissed to the 8th degree! ouch!! lol, yea i recommend a cast if the bandaides don't work! o0o0 burn!hehe thnx again!~AmericanRonnyBabe Report Review
Who is it?
and Jae better get lost
i mean hes mine
~TonksAuthor's Response: hehe u'll see! o0o0o0 i rhymed! i'm poet and i didn't no it!! haha i'm lame! thnx again for ur faithful reviews!~AmericanRonnyBabe Report Review
“Yeah, me too,” harshly cut off Harry. He rose and cast Ginny a hurt look, a look of utter loathing, but of heart breaking tenderness too. The look was more sad and disappointing, rather than hateful, but full of contempt all the same.
is it just me or is Ren not liking this?
the chappies are getting shorter and shorter every time!!!!
Oh well once agian i try
OY! POTTER! IM HERE!!!!!!
~RaeAuthor's Response: hey i'm getting better! half thru the 8th chappie! and i'll make the next longer than the last! SO DON'T TSK ME!! lol jk thnx for ur review!~AmericanRonnyBabe Report Review
is what im talking about!!
Harry, honey, im over here!!!!
COME TO RAE!
~TonksAuthor's Response: wut about tim and sam? wut happened to our corpse bride moment! lol thnx for review!~AmericanRonnyBabe Report Review
oh gawd Harry leave poor Ginny alone
COME TO ME HARRY!
~TonksAuthor's Response: wonderful!! wut a girl wants wut a girl needs! haha its a small world after all!!thnx again!~AmericanRonnyBabe Report Review
What a great chappie
About the moving slow comment, well its good to have a review and refresher, especially since some of us have only read the book once!! WAY to painful for me!
also, I do LOVE Harry and Oliver!
~TonksAuthor's Response: hehe, yes it is nice. lol some of you should reread the book then! jk jk! thnx for ur review!~AmericanRonnyBabe Report Review
i completely lost it just now! YOU BLOODY EVIL PERSON[jk] YOU STOPPED WRITING ARGHHHHHH! keep writing please. i am down on my knees. ha that rhymed. god job you get a 10!Author's Response: lol, sry about that, i've been having some MAJOR writers block, and i no wut i want to happen next, but not exactly sure if i like it. lol if that made sense. thnx for ur review tho!~AmericanRonnyBabe Report Review
hurry up and finich the story plz.. I realy want to know what's come next...... :) Report Review
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