Cool fanfic so far. Hope to see more. Oh and I am adding to my faves.Author's Response: thanks!! Report Review
Cool story so far. But oh dear....that one isn't a firework..Keep up the great work.Author's Response: thanks! lol well aunt marge seems to think so. Report Review
liking it so far but whats up with ginny???? hope you continue though please no h/hr ship :)Author's Response: you will see with ginny lol. oh dont worry no h/hr ship. thanks for the review! Report Review
MEME right more Please dont leave me hanging.LOL. Seriously though you write extremely WELL GA PAL Continue to writeAuthor's Response: I will right more!! Thanks for the compliment!! You will have to hang a little longer though lol!! Thanks again NiNa I am very happy!!:) Report Review
Hey MeMe Cool, nice to see a very serious side of you but u should right about Rita more and Harry LOL Bye got to go Keep on writing u are a hero to me LOL BYEAuthor's Response: Yes this is a little more serious than Rich Weasley. lol you will learn more about Rita in the next chapter ok? actually maybe chapter four I am not sure yet lol yes i am a hero to many!! Thanks Niesha so much for writing a review for me on here!! You should get an account on here!! Report Review
Well I saw some spelling errors, but other then that, nice job! I can't wait until my fourth chapter is validated! Oh, I hope you like it MeMe! Mmmm, I wonder who the expected but unexpected guest is, even though it's obvious lol. Author's Response: Yes it is obvious isn't it? hehe and thats what is so great about this story haha just kidding! Yes I check back everyday to see if your story has been updated...I wish I wrote somewhat good stories but hey I try hehe! Hey if you wanna be my spell checker thats fine I would love that lol! Thanks again Report Review
Hey MeMe! Since you've been so sweet about my story, I decided to check your's out! There was a few grammatical errors, but don't worry because I do it too lol! Well since you wrote this introduction as if no one new Harry's story, you might want to mention who Pettigrew is. Just a little tip. Good job though! :D Author's Response: Thank you for the tip! I shall listen to my great editor ;)! I try to write stories but I am more talented at reading them lol. I will add an extra paragraph about Mr. Peter Pettigrew since that chapter is so short anyway! Thank you for checking out my story! MeMe Report Review
Ireally like ur third chapter. it's very nice. LoL. Can't wait to read more.Author's Response: SSSSSsshhhh...no one else is supposed to know that you are helping me with my story lol;)! Actually im kinda sneaking on here but im not reading Harry Potter so hmmm i dunno! But thank you for the compliment,pretty soon everyone else can read it too!! Report Review
that seems like it....uhmm....i dont know how to explain it...lol...i thought it was really good.Author's Response: oh thank you very much! I may make some changes to it or I may not continue this story I am not sure yet it is just my story would not fit with the 6th book you know but i dont know I will have to think about it.Thanks again for the rewiew!:) Report Review
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