PLEASE ADD MORE CHAPTERS THIS IS AWESOME!! I LOVE LUNA SO MUCH!!! Report Review
good Report Review
watch your spelling! I'm okay with a few but spelling filch flinch is just wrong Report Review
i'd like to read more on this story its really cool Report Review
ok now i'm ready for the next chapter. keep em comming Report Review
You should work on your spelling. But it's cute I guess. Report Review
Interesting story. Like Cherry mentioned, there were a few grammar problems that could be fixed, and you also might want work on descriptions. Nevertheless, this story looks promising, and I look forward to seeing where it leads. Report Review
You're a pretty talented writer, but I think you should work on you grammar a little bit. The spelling could use checking and you should try to make phrases sound better. Hope I didn't make you feel bad. Good story. ~*Cherry Report Review
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