yayay! happpy moments.
I hope you CONTINUE THIS STORY.
xxJess Report Review
uhohs... This cant be goood.
xxJess Report Review
this was one of the best stories that i have read in a LONG time. So i give it a...10/10 Report Review
Aw... that's so sweet! He proposed! Aw...!!! :) :) :)
Keep up the fantastic work and can't wait until the next chappie comes up! :) Report Review
Love it! Must read next chappie now! lol! :) Keep up the fantastic work! :) Report Review
-cries- That's beautiful! I love it! Poor Ginny, I feel more and more sorry for her with each line of the story I read. But Harry's with her and he's taking good care of her, so she should be good.
I liked the thing about Hermione, and Ron getting into the cupboards. Lol. And Ginny is extremely in character with the way that she's always telling Harry that she can do things herself. Like I said, I'm loving this. Update soon!
P.S. Just a quick suggestion from one author to another, try using a something else besides said when having people talk. Try things such as stated, remarked, commented, spoke, grumbled, mumbled, muttered, announced, voiced, and mentioned. It just makes the writing flow better instead of reading 'he said', 'she said', 'he said'. Please don't take offense to that, I'm only trying to help! :)Author's Response: i will work on that thanks! im not offended at all, i appreciate it lol, glad you liked it, i keep putting off to updated this, but i think i will Report Review
That was a good first chapter. Poor Ginny, though. I feel so bad for her. I can't even begin to imagine what it would be like to not be able to walk. Welp, I'm off to read more!
-Sam Report Review
Please continue! Report Review
awww. cute story. i cant wait for another update! Report Review
I like it. Report Review
wow...poor ginny.great plot by the way.i hope malfoy will arive in the next chapter.update very soon Report Review
Aww, cute story... Keep posting, I like it. Report Review
Aww that was so sweet I really loved this chapter keep going!! Report Review
awww..this story is so sweet..please write more soon!! Report Review
I can tell this is gonna become one of my favorites!!!!
Now ditch Harry and get with the Malfoy so we can get some REAL action *snicker* only joking, love.
I LOVE IT!!!! Report Review
Hey! This is really good! Keep it up!Author's Response: thanks! ill do my best then! Report Review
this story is reeeeally good...please keep it goingAuthor's Response: im glad your enjoying it! I'll be sure and have a chapter ready for you! Report Review
Excellant! I like this, I can't wait for you to continue!!!Author's Response: thanks! Ill be sure to have a new chapter once we can submit again Report Review
that was really good i want to know what happends next KEEP going lol buh byeAuthor's Response: thanks for the review! I'll be sure to have a chapter ready after we can submit again Report Review
are ginny and harry, like, together or something? great story so far, can't wait for the next part!Author's Response: yeah they are, and thanks! Report Review
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