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Review #1, by Amanda one horcrux down

11th January 2007:
"The snake looked at him and froze. At once it turned to a rubber. It was now only a toy. " I'm sorry, but when I read this, I got the impression that the snake turne into a cute widdle stuffed animal. Made me laugh for some reason. Happy? I reviewed!

Author's Response: And what a helpful review it was, dude. Thanks. See you at school.

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Review #2, by Amanda one horcrux down

11th January 2007:
"The snake looked at him and froze. At once it turned to a rubber. It was now only a toy. " I'm sorry, but when I read this, I got the impression that the snake turne into a cute widdle stuffed animal. Made me laugh for some reason. Happy? I reviewed!

Author's Response: what? did you post it twice?

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Review #3, by romancewriter Godric's Hollow

30th January 2006:
its very very very very very WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: wow, now that's a lot of verys. Thanks loads for reviewing, I just put the 6th chapter up so it shoudl there within a day or so

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Review #4, by padfootluvr48 the new beginings

18th November 2005:
yay, you updated. Can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: I'll try and get a new chapter up soon!

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Review #5, by flutterby Ron is the problem

29th July 2005:
it's a good story and has a lot of promise. good job!!! check out my story, Learning: Life and Love by me, flutterby! ;)

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments! I'll be sure to check out your story, I'm always looking for new fanfics.

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Review #6, by AmberEloquence Ron is the problem

24th July 2005:
It's okay . . . I'm guessing you haven't read HBP, because it has a lot of stuff on Blaise. But anyway, his name is Blaise Zabini, not Zambini. Your story would look a lot better if you spaced it out more, because it looks more appealing if it is. Try looking over your work, because there were a lot of spelling mistakes, and you didn't capitalize a lot of things that should have been. Keep writing.

-AmberEloquence

Author's Response: I wrote this a couple days before HBP so I didn't have much to go on for Blaise. Sorry about the name mixup, he was only mentioned a couple times b4 HBP so I couldn't remember. Thanks for the hints though, I'll try to space it out more. I have the second chapter written so I'll try to put it up.

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Review #7, by Dark sin15 Ron is the problem

18th July 2005:
Hi !, ithought your story was Great with a capital G! But I Hate emma watson!!

Author's Response: Thanks, b4 HBP I didn't know much about Blaise so I thought, what the heck. I have this thing about writing stories where Ginny pisses Ron off, its sooo much fun!

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