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Review #1, by fatmermaid The Valley of the Shadow of Death...

12th June 2009:
I know that that would never happen because J.K. Rowling never wrote it that way, but , nonetheless, it did make me cry.

Author's Response: AU AU AU AU AU AU I'm not JKR.

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Review #2, by Lady_Vana The Valley of the Shadow of Death...

28th February 2008:
um wow... I could only cringe at the thought if the finger nail being ripped from the skin and i unconsciously pulled my fingers into my hand as if to protect them. And I know that was only a mere description of the pain she felt. This was a really good tale and I loved it. I loved the ending and knowing that all three souls (including the other family) were together in the end. Even a soul that didn't really get to live.


Author's Response: your review prompted me to go re-read the story, as I haven't in a while, and I hate to sound egotistical, but I agree! thank you!!!!

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Review #3, by babygurl1012 The Valley of the Shadow of Death...

12th February 2008:
That was so sad! i almost cried. but they were reunited at the end so i guess that it all turned out ok.

Author's Response: HEY! no crying!

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Review #4, by Cfm887 The Valley of the Shadow of Death...

10th November 2007:
That was a fantastic story!! I hadn't yet read a story that made me cry, but this one did. Beautifully written.

Author's Response: SCORE!!! Haha I made someone cry!!! :P *gets well used box of kleenex*

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Review #5, by Jahaira101 The Valley of the Shadow of Death...

23rd November 2006:
Wow I cried 10/10

Author's Response: That seems to be the general emotional response! Thank you. :D *hug*

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Review #6, by jesi lily The Valley of the Shadow of Death...

10th September 2006:
I love this story, I'm in an emotional state as it is and after reading thois i cried, damn your writing but it was fantastic.

Author's Response: Awwww *hands Kleenex* Damnit, I am running out of Kleenex LOL.

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Review #7, by sarcastic hp lover The Valley of the Shadow of Death...

9th August 2006:
I'm a bit confused could you explain it?
I feel like an idiot though.

Author's Response: Well. It's actually from Ginny's perspective, the story set about a month after she finds she is pregnant (it might be sooner, I haven't read it in a while) with Harry's child. It is the aftermath of the Last Battle, the one in which Harry finally defeats Voldemort but is himself defeated afterwards by Bellatrix Black's dying breaths. Ginny is left with the wreckage of her life, everyone she loves is dead, and along comes Lucius Malfoy with some Dementors that sides with Voldemort. The taunts her for a bit, and enraged by her defiance has the Dementors Kiss her. It describes the Kiss itself and then how hallow and clueless she seems afterwards. Medics arrive soon after, and inform Fudge, who is surveying the wreckage, that it is inhumane to let her live, as she is pregnant and her child is now, also, soul-less. Therefore Fudge, who is himself a very weak person both politically and guts-wise, must be the one to kill her and relieve her from her emptyness. Her soul is not lost, however, due to it's recent departure, and she finds herself at Home- in Heaven, she finds her house in the Burrow there. Coming in, everyone is there, as if waiting for her, and they have a reunion, especially between herself and Harry, and she holds in her arms their baby, not unborn and malformed but an infant and healthy. The story ends here, and we assume that they are to all exist together in Heaven, basically, forever.

Long explanation, I know, but you get it now, right??! :P

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Review #8, by bearcollector07 The Valley of the Shadow of Death...

2nd August 2006:
This story was so sad. I'm on the verge of tears. You have a talent.

Author's Response: Awwh don't cry dear! *gets Kleenex* I'm sorry lol. It was meant to be saddening but not THAT saddening, the end was supposed to be happyish!!! And thank you very much!

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Review #9, by smile2006 The Valley of the Shadow of Death...

22nd June 2006:
oh you... that was a right tear jerker! very well written!
RATING-10/10! excellent!!

Author's Response: Awww, thank you mucho! It really was something that I tried to convey as much heartbreak as I could.... Thanks!!!!

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Review #10, by 666666 The Valley of the Shadow of Death...

21st April 2006:
awesome but check ur spellings

Author's Response: Oh. Thanks.

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Review #11, by cluelessagain The Valley of the Shadow of Death...

19th April 2006:
I love it so much I have to write something again! OMG!! This was sooo - I ant even explain it! How old are you anyway? Oh yeah, I am saying this with all seriousness you really need to think about maybe being like a romance novelist. If you made a book I would sooo buy it! No matter how old you are! Thanks for the best one-shot story on this site!

Author's Response: Awwww, thank you sooo much!!! I am actually 16, but I wrote this when I was still 15, cos my birthday is in December. But yea I do want to be a novelist.

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Review #12, by clueless921 The Valley of the Shadow of Death...

19th April 2006:
OMG!!!!!!!!!!! I think I just died with her. It was a one-shot and ussually I can't get that close to the characers on a one-shot, but that was like a bitter sweet love story that will be with me forever! It was sooo good. I can't stop thinking about it now! I loved it!

Author's Response: *hugs* That was the point, I wanted you to get close....

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Review #13, by Girly The Valley of the Shadow of Death...

19th March 2006:
Confused much????

Author's Response: *SIGH* I said to READ IT SLOWLY AND CAREFULLY. ALL of the quotes are in there FOR A REASON.

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Review #14, by meggie The Valley of the Shadow of Death...

27th February 2006:
awww, it's soo sad.

Author's Response: Aww! *hug* But it's happyish at the end.... They all went to Heaven!!

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Review #15, by irishhende818 The Valley of the Shadow of Death...

21st February 2006:
Good, a little confusing though. I like all the biblical quotes

Author's Response: aww, thank you! It is sort of hard to follow, that's why I tend to suggest reading most of my one-shots slowly. But the biblical quotes sort of add to the deepness, no?

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Review #16, by BritishEnglish The Valley of the Shadow of Death...

19th January 2006:
Wow, that was really nice. All the description and feeling was perfect. I'm not so sure any witches or wizards really had a religion though, did they? I'm still kind of iffy about that. But the rest of the story was really well done.

Author's Response: Awww, thanks. But yes I've always wondered that myself?? I've just always anted to know.....

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Review #17, by Ocean Potter The Valley of the Shadow of Death...

23rd December 2005:
The writing is really good, but I don't get it. was it a dream? What happends? I am really confused,

Author's Response: *SIGH* I put those bible excerpts and quotes in there FOR A REASON. They all died. They are all in heaven. *walks off, muttering*

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Review #18, by Remember The Valley of the Shadow of Death...

10th December 2005:
So sad... (sniff)

Author's Response: Awww. *hug*

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Review #19, by Katelyn Mason The Valley of the Shadow of Death...

26th November 2005:
beautiful, but being a dunce I am puszzled. Was it all a dream or is she in heavan with them all?

Author's Response: No, she's in heaven. I sort of put that one quote in there to prove that... the one about life being in heaven for you?? Anyways.... glad you thought it was beautiful!!

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Review #20, by PotterChic The Valley of the Shadow of Death...

15th October 2005:
IT'S BEAUTIFUL! I cried...

Author's Response: Aww me too.

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Review #21, by CoCo The Valley of the Shadow of Death...

18th September 2005:
Wow, I really liked how you had the verses and the church and the baby and everthing. You're ecxellent. Need I say more?

Author's Response: Awwww, thank you! That means a lot to me... And, I THOUGHT that the verses and everything would give it more depth, you know?

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Review #22, by JKindisguise The Valley of the Shadow of Death...

8th September 2005:
wow - is all I can say. er ... wow.

Author's Response: ....thanks? lol

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Review #23, by MarauderGirl101 The Valley of the Shadow of Death...

15th August 2005:
That was really sad and depressing. It was really well written though. You should write more like this.

Author's Response: Thanks! And, oh, believe me, I shall!!! *mwahahahaa....*

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Review #24, by IFellOutofMyBed The Valley of the Shadow of Death...

10th August 2005:
I am speechless... Words cannot even begin to describe how amazingly wonderful this is...

Author's Response: Awwwww, omg thanks that means so much to me. :D

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Review #25, by lucille266 The Valley of the Shadow of Death...

6th August 2005:
this is the saddest thing i have ever read! really good but so so sad!

Author's Response: Thanks!!! I adore sad things....

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