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2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Lieke The Approach

17th July 2005:
Oh, it's not really eventfull, but nice! Continue! Lovely story!

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Review #2, by Baybeetricia The Approach

16th July 2005:
First things first; you should space the lines out a bit. It looks kind of confusing. Now on with my review: 1.) Why are parents so clingy? 2.) He's so proud of her. That's so sweet 3.) Tiny Mione? *snorts* 4.) So cool. Please continue.

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