Nice story so far. Though a woeful absence from the dark side so far.
Lets hear what Voldy-kins and his lot are doing and thinking throughout this time!
dennisud Report Review
I think you need to post this tree somewhere!
dennisud Report Review
A ... trio?
ih0ih Report Review
omg u have to finish this story. ur evil u left it on a clif-hanger so not fair. plz post the next chapter. Report Review
hay hay yeah i am loving this story Report Review
wait does this mean that cho loves ginny? sorry but i'm really slow at these things.please send me an email at email@example.com Report Review
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Keep going. I like the story line so far. The Lily and James thing is cool, maybe they should egt a bigger part in the story and more lovey dovey. Harry and Hermione make the perfect couple in my book and Luna and Ron are great too. The Cho and Ginny things freaks me out a little but, if you write it well then all will fall into place. The Krum thing is good, does he play a bigger part? I always thought that he made for a good bad guy.Author's Response: Krum'll play a bigger part, believe me. I won't say more, but he WILL be a good guy, sorry. :D Report Review
WINDY IF I UPDATE YOU MUST UPDATE BECAUSE I SAID SO. Please? *puppy dog face* PLEASE? I SWEAR i'll update, really. I just love your story even though its H/Hr. Please! ~Luna, with best wishes and death threatsAuthor's Response: I'd like to issue an apology to Luna and everyone else. I haven't been on much lately, and I seem to have lost my motivation for writing lately, since the initial work of my story was deleted and I had to start over. I'll get back on it, and I'll post up a chapter as soon as I can finish one and like it. Promise Report Review
OMG. OMG. OMG. OMGOMGOMG. You are an EVIL cliffie person. EVIL. YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOMETIME. I NEED TO KNOW WHAT'S HAPPENING NEXT. Very good writing, btw. ~LunaAuthor's Response: This is a notice to all readers: This story has currently been discontinued. I'm sorry, I just can't really focus on trying to get into HP much anymore. I might return to it someday, but till then, if you wish to use what I've written so far, email me at firstname.lastname@example.org and I'll more than likely say yes, provided initial credit is given. Report Review
OMFG. PLOT TWIST. and a really good one too, if i do say so. I so like the rapier, and i don't like how in founders fics they usually don't illuminate the friendship between them. But so many nice twists!~LunaAuthor's Response: Heh, if it's not in other fics chances are you'll find it in mine. Name another fic that's thought of a Ginny/Cho romance AND pulled it off well? :P I have to sign my work with an unusual twist or sixty. :D Report Review
I thought that the Cho/Ginny would be all wonky and stuff, but you get a really good start into it. I LOVE THE ELEMENTAL STUFF. I like luna's powers especially (hehe). Very good! onto the next three chapters!~LunaAuthor's Response: Heh, I spent ages profiling them to get their elements right, and even longer reprofiling them WITH their elements to make sure I got any character changes right. :P Luna suits her elements because while she can be fierce, she's generally peaceful and serene, and she's very compassionate, despite appearing as if she doesn't actually know what's going on. :) Thanks for the review! Report Review
Ooh, i like this kid! Hope you bring out more of her later! i like your oc's, suze is cool. AND HARRY IS HOME YAY FLUFF. ~LunaAuthor's Response: You might not see her from one decade of chapters to the next, but you'll definitely see more of her! She might just play a key role in the Golden Six, so might Draco and Cho. Report Review
Wow. this was VERY good. I love these scenes in movies, but i'd have no idea what they were called or whatever. i can see how you'd have to rewrite this a lot, and i think you did really well. ~LunaAuthor's Response: Heh, I originally had it extremely combatant, and it didn't fit their haracters at all, so I had to keep editing till it fit them. :P Thanks! Report Review
I started this again, after being really scared by chapter 12. I really really like the new Snape. that is EXACTLY how they should get along if he's good. thats one of the things i'll remember. And i like that malfoy switched sides, and hermione slapping him. AAAH THEY'RE ALL BACK AT HOGWARTS I COULD CRY. yay! ~LunaAuthor's Response: Hee! You know you'll wear my fingers out with all the reviewing you do Luna. :D Thanks! Report Review
Great chapter again. As always your fight scenes are so descriptive you can almost see the fight happening. Good idea on using the al bhed language. Can't wait for the next update.Author's Response: Heh, thanks, if there's one thing I know how to do it's fighting. :P I'll update as soon as I can. Report Review
very interesting. I like their bloodlines, though it gets a bit confusing in spaces. Off to read the next chapter, and this one was great.Author's Response: Heh, yeah, I figured that might be interesting. You think reading it was confusing, I had to write it. >< thanks for the review! Report Review
OMG!!! I thought that JK Rowling said that moldie Voldie was salazar slytherins true heir 'cause he could open the chamber of secrets?! this is a most eccselent story, though!Author's Response: That Voldie is Slytherin's Heir, not his true heir, no such thing. The main point in that wasn't that Draco was Slytherin's heir, but that Draco and Moldywart were related. :D Report Review
Ew...EW.. I once read this fanfic where harry pretended to like hermione and he was cutting up her toast and it was disgusting, and ew...But, now that i think on it, its not so bad if its ron and hermione. well, really good! LunaBAuthor's Response: Hey, teenagers they may be, but they're a couple, and there's always little things they do to show each other they care in any couple. Report Review
Oh...that's so sad...I can't believe Hermione tried to kill herself, thats so depressing. *sniff* I am somehow making my way through the snogs, though wincing often. I feel kinda sick now. Oh...LunaBAuthor's Response: Heh, why does it affect you that bad? I can handle R/Hr, so long as the story's good. :D Report Review
wow. that is emotional. Seems Messr. Firewind is pretty good. ;) That's so sad about hermione, i gotta keep reading this! LunaBAuthor's Response: *grin* I wrote that scene before I begun the story. I've always wanted to write something like that, so I planned that in the story before I powered up my laptop. Report Review
OMG YAY THEY ROCK!!! *grins* Foodfights are fun... they go around a go HEEYAH! I THROW FOOD AT YOU!!! MEH HEH HEH! The James/Sirius interrupting thing was good and marauder-esque, even if it was the wrong people *grumblegrumbleRONandHERMIONEgrumblegrumble* Good job, as always. I'm just gonna review every chapter, this thing needs more publicity! LunaBAuthor's Response: Heh, James and Sirius HAVE to be marauders about everything, and everyone loves a food fight. And keep reviewing, as much work as it gives me (I ALWAYS answer a review) it's still fun, and I like seeing your thoughts! Report Review
Who? WHo? WHO? The only thing about this and the last chapter is that all of them should be totally and completely shocked out of their wits. They seem to get over it in a second. Okay, yeah. LunaBAuthor's Response: James and Lily had a huge reputation, as Marauders, as did Sirius. Everyone knows that nothings puts a Marauder down for long, and they always have a contingency plan. I think Dumbledore knew of Lily's charm, and most of the others would have at least expected them to have something up their sleeeve. Ok, a long shot I know, but still. Report Review
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