Reading Reviews for Life Of A Pranksters Queen
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Review #1, by blue dragon Halloween Plans

12th September 2005:
I've read all of your storys so far and really like them but I just wanted to let you know that I thought this one was going a bit to slow. Why don't you add a nother chapter or add to one and conect them some more. An d take out the parts where you tell whats been going on for the past 2 months in one paragraph. Think they're great any ways but just keep writing!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. Yah, i know my writing is a little slow sometimes. I'm working on theat, but because school just started, i haven't been writing as much. I know that's not an excuse, but on weekends i'll try ot write more. Please keep reading and let me know what you think. (tell you the truth, not a lot of people like my stories, so it's kice to know that you like them) Thanks again for reviewing, i'll keep your comments in mind when i keep writing

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Review #2, by woodlover Halloween Plans

15th July 2005:
REMUS IS A DICK!!!! How cold he do that to his best friend? Who has kept his most private secret??? You need to get a beta reader, there are a lot of mistakes and it makes it a bit difficult to read. Also try to add more detail, it kinda jumps. But good story otherwise!

Author's Response: Thanks. Don't worry, this isn't a Remus/Lily ff, so it will work out. I was having a hard time getting my ideas down in the right order, so i am sorry if it jumps around a little bit. The program that i was using to write this one didn't have spell check, bt i'm switching programs, so there shouldn't be as many errors in further chapters. Thank you so muc for reading and reviewing!!! I'm glad you liked it.

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