i loved it! please write some more!Author's Response: i never really planned on adding onto it....but its definatley someything to think about. thanks for the review! Report Review
Yay! omg that made cry, I loved it!
Author's Response: i'm glad you liked it!!! Report Review
Poetry in a story & a song if i've ever seen it. Beautiful!Author's Response: thank you! i really appreciate the support Report Review
Oh thats such a sweet story and I really like it it seems so simialiar to what I went through with my mates when I left for boarding school but we still don't have contact with each other thoughAuthor's Response: i went though the same thing when i left for boarding school! well kind of. sometimes we talked, but it was mostly about nothing and the coversations were ridiculously short and ones you might expect to share with a stranger. I wrote a story with a happy ending for a lack of my happy ending : ( Report Review
Great Job. Funny thing about it was that I was listening to the song while I was reading it. Author's Response: love that song. if there was a song hall of fame, it would definatley be in it. thanks for reading! Report Review
#1- i liked it alot. its like the song was meant for that if you thought deep enough. good job!
#2- well done. a bit fluffy at the end, but,, hey, who doesn't like a tiny bit of fluff now and again? bravo!Author's Response: Thanks! I love that song so much. And yeah, i know it was a little fluffy at the end, but i couldnt think of a better ending without making it more than a one-shot. Fluff is good though, especially with a little peanut butter ; ) Report Review
That's great! You're so in my favourite now!Author's Response: *does happy dance* glad you liked it! thanks for adding me to your fav list! Report Review
YAY! That was a pretty groovy story. And, everyone's gotta love No Doubt... like seriously. Author's Response: honestly, who does not love No Doubt? I havent met a person yet. they're just that incredible. thanks for the review, i mucho appreciate it!!! Report Review
that was great...I was sad when it ended...Author's Response: ohhh i'm sorry you were sad.....if it makes you feel any better, i like writing one-shots so more will be coming along. look back soon! Report Review
That's so cute!
Love that song ;) I was singing along hahahaha!
Great linkage- love it!
Don't put your quill down!
Charisse xoxoAuthor's Response: hahaha i was singing as i wrote it. such an incredible song and it can relate to so many different moments. quill wont be retiring for a long time, so look back for more stories!!! Report Review
I loved it it was a happily ever after story!Author's Response: happily ever after stories are, like, a must. otherwise you end feeling sad and depressed and really, who wants that? :) Report Review
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