6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by randomwriter Chapter One and Only

9th July 2014:
House Cup 2014 Review

Hello there :) I'm here to review your story for the House Cup!

When I first started reading this, I got a little confused and was starting to think a lot of it didn't make sense. I also thought that the characters were behaving a little unlike themselves. But then it dawned on me. How stupid! It isn't meant to be serious!

I was a little confused about why this woman came, in stead of Grubbly Plank. You explained Hagrid's absence, but I've never even heard of this woman and she is definition weird. The stuff she was saying was obviously a rouse, but it was so funny.

I loved this parody-esque take on things. I laughed a lot, especially at that tan part. Hermione is so smart, even in these weird situations. Only she could have thought of something like that without it seeming stupid! Whoever this lady is, she is rather fishy. I hope you write another humour story with her in it! It'd be great :)

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Review #2, by nott theodore Chapter One and Only

8th July 2014:
Hello! I'm here reviewing stories for the house cup which contain magical creatures within the grounds of Hogwarts.

I thought this story was absolutely hilarious! It was so funny to read this moment and it was nice because it's a lot lighter than the sort of story you usually read when the Trio are at Hogwarts. I loved the descriptions of the teacher giving them the Care of Magical Creatures lesson and also the descriptions of what Harry and Ron were wearing - I've certainly never pictured them like that before!

It made me laugh that the teacher was even stranger than Hagrid is as a Care of Magical Creatures teacher! This strange water toad spirit that she was talking about... it reminded me a bit of Trelawney! I loved Hermione's solution though, and that you showed some of her rebellious nature coming through rather than her being a goody-two shoes. It was a great way to get them out of the lesson and it made me laugh a lot!

Sian :)
Gryffindor House Cup 2014 Review Educational Decree #4

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Review #3, by Andreas (dansih) Chapter One and Only

19th July 2005:
well i dont know what elmo is, but Harry and Ron in Teletubbies boxers??? LOOOOOOOL

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Review #4, by Cassie Chapter One and Only

13th July 2005:

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Review #5, by who am i? Chapter One and Only

11th July 2005:
Oh my god it was funny!!!!!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you.

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Review #6, by Amanda Chapter One and Only

10th July 2005:
I thought your story was really good!!!!!!!! LOL elmo underwear. keep up the great writing

Author's Response: I'm flattered. Thank you VERY much for the review!

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