I like this story! Its really good. Even some parts made me laugh. Well, I found some mistakes and in the last A/N, you said to tell you so here it is: “No wonder we had to get a biting book, who else would set one?” Fred was ecstatic and couldn’t wait to congratulate him. Him and George wolfed down their food and went to shake his hand while the others --- I think you might need to finish this sentence. Thats all I found. Please update soon! Report Review
I think its a very good start to a story. You've done a good job so far! Report Review
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