No Mights! YES!! Write mmore about Max! It is really good! Report Review
If I remember correctly Harry was Horrible at Legilimency and Occulmency. just thought you should know! otherwise it is really good. Report Review
What happened in the Final battle? Is it the same as the book? And What happened to Ginny? And I really don't like Lavender now. Report Review
that was really good! chapter rating: 10/10, story rating: 100/10 Report Review
IN N OUT! THE best fast food restaurant in the WORLD!!! by the way, i love the story so far. lol. 10/10 and onto reading the last 2 chapters! Report Review
i really liked you story it was great !1 Report Review
cute story Report Review
Okay, so I really love this story. It's different than all the others I've reas, and I really like it! Update really soon! Report Review
That was really good. Very nicely written, and I like the idea of looking at Harry through his son's point of view. Hope you write more stories like this. ^-^ 10/10 Report Review
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Last chapter, last review. Wow. PLEASE write a sequel. First off, I'd like to apologise for the short and lousy reviews. I hope I can make this one longer and better than those. This really was an amazing story. Classic. Seriously. Max (Harry James Potter Jr.) is exactly how I imagined Harry(Harry James Potter Sr.)'s son to be. Just like him. Thank you for giving me an excellent story to read. So, 1000/10 (You deserve it) and for the final time, AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.Author's Response: You're so sweet to have written all of those reviews to me. I appreciate it so much. You have no idea. It's really given me some inspiration to write a sequel and hopefully I'll be able to get around to that once I get through all of the rest of my updates. Once again, thank you for the kind reviews and for all of the "awws" :) much, much love! ;) ~nomikkin Report Review
Awwwwwww(Still going strong!). Love this chapter. Harry James Potter Jr. really is like Harry James Potter (Sr.) Only one more chapter to go *sniffs*. I'm sad. 10/10Author's Response: Aw (there it is again, lol), don't be sad! I know it's the end of the story,but who knows, maybe I'll gain some energy after updating a whole load of my stories and write a sequel. We'll see. much love! ;) ~nomikkin Report Review
Awwwww(again). I clicked on those arrow thingies to go to the the second-last(gasp) chapter and I realised that I hadn't left a review. SO naturally, I had to go back. Well, here it is. Brilliant chapter. 10/10Author's Response: You are so sweet to keep reviewing like this, really. It means so much to me. Thank you very much. I really do appreciate it. Tons. much love! ;) ~nomikkin Report Review
Awwww(I swear, I'll never get tired of that word). Cute chapter. Only three more chapters to go! Can't believe it. 10/10Author's Response: "Awww" is a good word. It descibes a lot. lol. I'm glad you're liking it! The chapters go by fast, huh? lol. much love! ;) ~nomikkin Report Review
Haha. I like Max. He really is a "Harry James Potter Jr." Nice job. 10/10Author's Response: I knoww, isn't he? lol. I love it! much love! ;) ~nomikkin Report Review
Awww(I'm saying it again). So, finally Max knows. Nice. Was it hard to write this chapter? It would be hard for me. Anyways, 10/10 Author's Response: Itwas kind of hard to get it all out if that's what you mean, but actually it flowed pretty well. The violent part was actually my favorite because I was able to go back and forth and add more and more detail in my own words. Sounds kind of grotesque, but I was very pleased with the way it came out; it was my vision exactly. Anyways, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much for reviewing. much love! ;) ~nomikkin Report Review
Suspense, suspense. This chapter is short, compared to your other ones. It's good anyways. 10/10Author's Response: Well it's short for a reason; so it can build suspense just like it was supposed to. lol. glad you liked it! much love! ;) ~nomikkin Report Review
Awww(I say that a lot, don't I?). A confession of love. Finally. Excellent chapter. 10/10Author's Response: I know. It's about time the two finally said those three words to each other! lol. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!! much love! ;) ~nomikkin Report Review
Lol. 'For once a girlie gift came in handy'. Nice. Like this chapter. 10/10, as usual.Author's Response: Lol, well it did come in handy and guys kind of don't like getting candles, At least not guys I know. lol. Glad you liked this chapter. Thanks for reviewing! much love! ;) ~nomikkin Report Review
Wow. I was going to up to get some sleep, but suddenly, I'm not tired anymore. I have to find out what happens next. 10/10Author's Response: Lol, aw I shouldn't keep you up like that! But I guess it means I'm doing something right. Thanks for staying up and reading and for taking the ime out to review! much love! ;) ~nomikkin Report Review
Awwwww......well, I think you can guess how I feel about your chapter(in case you can't, I like it). 10/10 Author's Response: Lol, yes I can tell. Thanks for reviewing and giving me your thoughts. much love! ;) ~nomikkin Report Review
Awww. I feel sorry for both of them, Harry and Max. This is a very good story, so far. 10/10Author's Response: A lot of sympathy can be given to both of them in this story. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it. much love! ;) ~nomikkin Report Review
Great start!!! I can't wait to read more. 10/10Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying it so far. Thanks for reviewing! much love! ;) ~nomikkin Report Review
that rocked! plzz do a sequel!Author's Response: I'll try and get one up! Thanks so much for reading all of it and for reviewing! much love! ;) ~nomikkin Report Review
i dont get it...why is harry being so mean?Author's Response: Keep reading and find out. You won't find all of the answers in the first chapter my dear. But it's always good to ask. ^_^ much love! ;) ~nomikkin Report Review
How happy I am that I found a fic that was able to make me pay attention. Lately, I have not been able to read a fic over 10 000 words. It did depress me as I knew the fics I had begun to read actually were really good. But I got so happy when I discovered that I would just continue... and continue reading this fic. I've recovered! :D lol. I've no idea why I like this that much. It was just... awesome. Why I think a fic about Harry's Muggle (or Squib, then) son is so interesting, is beyond my understanding. I just loved it.Author's Response: This is by far one of my favorite fics. I don't know how exactly I came up with the idea, but it worked out pretty good and seemed to flow exceptionally well. I'm glad I was able to entice you into a feature-length fic. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! much love! ;) ~nomikkin Report Review
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