Classic Dramione dance one-shot, in truth. But it's different in the way that it was Ron that brought them back together, not their own choice. :)
I really like the fact that even though Ron "has the emotional range of a teaspoon", it was because he loved Hermione that he realized she wasn't truly happy with him, and that Draco had been withdrawn ever since the relationship had ended. Maybe that's why Hermione described it as "an open wound", because she hadn't been able to accept that she loved Draco yet.
I really loved how Draco was scolding himself for letting her go last time, because in truth, he's an extremely selfish person and he gets what he wants in the end. But I like how over the dilemma of Hermione, he hesitates and doesn't persevere at it like he does for everything else.
Honestly, I have to say that the dance and the last line of the story are quite cliche, but definitely effective in conveying their feelings. The passionate dance moves and her provocative dress really bring out their emotions, and the way Draco followed her when she ran and she said that line, it's so sweet. :) Kudos for a new twist on the classic Dramione one-shot. Report Review
PERFECT! That was absolutely perfect, I loved it! =D "I guess some mistakes are worth making twice." I loved that line sooo much, it's so romantic, I could faint... =D *dreamy sigh* Keep writing please, your writing is beautiful. Some people, like me, would love to write like you do. =)
11/10Author's Response: Thank you so much! What a sweet thing to say! Report Review
When she ran towards him- I started crying. Your stories are a vicious cycle, I tell you! =) I read one, wail, run grab some tissues, sniff pathetically, and click another. And boom- I'm crying again =) I love them. I loved how they danced - I loved how Ron wasn't the bad guy- I loved how he let her go- and I loved how Draco went after her. And she went after him *squeals* *sniffs* I know you must hear this a lot- but I really, really do love this story. There needs to be a different scale. 12345678910Celtic. =)Author's Response: Thank you Sarah - you flatter me far too much >_< I am so happy you have enjoyed so many of my pieces!! Report Review
i really really love this
story i read it all the time
=DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much!! Report Review
oh that was definatly a nice one shot
so well written great stuff :)Author's Response: Thanks so much gitgit! Report Review
a beautiful story.
i love it. truly i do.Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading!! I really appreciate your support!!! Report Review
Aww, that was sweet, as in both cute, and cool. A nice, well written oneshot, and totaly a 10/10!!!Author's Response: thank you Jen ^_^ Report Review
Such a graceful story. Don't ask me how its graceful, but it just works. Enchantingly written. I can just imagine the dance. Almost makes me want to learn how to dance (put then that would put me in a position of rushed assignments and such...perhaps later)Author's Response: ^_- You should definetly dance! Everyone should dance! Dancing is liberating! heh I am glad you enjoyed ^_- Report Review
absaloutly adorable and i fell in love with the writing! great job!^_^Author's Response: Thank you ^_^ Report Review
I'm never usually a fan of songfics, but this is really well told. It's a good idea, and who doesn't love a Dramione? Very good!Author's Response: Thank you very very much Angharad ^_^ Report Review
I never was a terribly big fan of Ricky Martin, But I love this story! that's the most adorable thing i've read all day.Author's Response: Aw thank you ^_- Report Review
That was a really awesome one shot. Kudos! I felt like I was reading a book! You placed all the right words in all the right places. Good job!Author's Response: Thanks Emmy ^_- Report Review
This is amazing and I have already read this like five times and I love it a little more each time. For once, I am going to say that it doesn't need a sequel! Keep writing!Author's Response: Thank you very much
i cried :)Author's Response: Aw thanks hun Report Review
oh my gosh! I don't usually read fanfics with dancing in them, but this is really different. Because you CAN describe a dance really well. Are you a dancer? You must be.
And my heart was racing with every word of the story, unlike authors who try and fail to make the atmosphere tense, you do it perfectly well, once again. Brilliant. Author's Response: Wow thank you so much! I do dance but my profession is singing. I am glad you enjoyed! Report Review
OMG. So sweet! I love it! I mean, it was kind of sad and heartbreakingly harsh at fist but then BAM! It all turned around for the better. The dance was beautiful, your choice of words gorgeous...one word to sum it up...PERFECT!Author's Response: Aw that is so sweet ^_^ Thank you very much ^_^ Report Review
This is ridiculous! Is it possible for a normal human being to write like this? Well obviously you're not normal. You're beond extraordinary. Extraordinarily good, that is. I would flattered if my writing was even 1/10th as good as this.
I give you a Million out of ten.
~AlyAuthor's Response: Heh heh I am not normal. ^_- That is so sweet, thanks so much, Aly! Report Review
Very sweet! I loved the last line. And the whole dancing sequence was really nice as well.Author's Response: Thank you ^_^ This is not one of my better stories... so I am always suprised to get positive reviews for it Report Review
Beautiful *tear* it was so good!Author's Response: Aw thanks ^_^ Report Review
Wow! I was looking for a quick read and didn't expect to come across anything so powerful and interesting! Good work!Author's Response: Thank you so much ^_^ Report Review
aw... one of my new favorite stories lol. Its so good!!!Author's Response: Thank you, Whisper! Report Review
I finally had the chance to answer a review you gave me several months ago when you were offering to review on the forums, and I remembered I had never returned it. So here I am, better late than never, I guess!
I've been a fan of Draco/Hermione for a long time but don't usually read D/Hr one-shots because I find them rushed. This one, however, worked wonderfully. You did a great job of giving their history, both with the flashback and their thoughts.
This was also one of the first songfics I've read where the song lyrics actually added to the story. They went perfectly with your writing, giving the feeling of the music playing in the background of the dance. It also didn't feel like the plot was forced to fit around the lyrics - they blended together well.
All in all, I feel like you captured their characters and the struggle they would have with a relationship. I loved the twist of Ron helping them, which was very different than most D/Hr fics, and I loved the happy ending! Excellent job.
-LaneAuthor's Response: Thank you Lane ^_^ Better late then never is absolutely correct ^_^ If you like the songfic idea, you'd probably like my newest ones where the lyrics are actually the dialogue ^_^ Thank you for the review Report Review
I usually don't like one-shots but this is amazing!! =) 10/10Author's Response: Thank you mlui ^_^ Report Review
Great story you should make it into a novel!!!Author's Response: Check out my story Arabesque ^_- Its what you are looking for Report Review
great story.totally wonderful. besides there truly are mistakes worth making twiceAuthor's Response: Thank you Jessi ^_- Report Review
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