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Review #1, by Yui

Chapter Three

2nd June 2006:

Great chapter so far i really cant wait to read the next chapter

Author's Response: thank you!

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Review #2, by Lily Black

Chapter Two

3rd July 2005:

I love the story..... very interesting! i like the whole thing where Lily was pregnant and they were able to save the baby.... but whats with this whole hanging with draco thing?

Author's Response: well, Draco has an eye for beautiful women who are standing alone in a train station i guess. He noticed she spoke french, so he starts showing off his French skills... just like a Malfoy would. Dont worry, Nicole doesn't end up with him... she ends up with....... oh wait, i cant tell you yet. haha

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Review #3, by Prudence Prior

Chapter Two

3rd July 2005:

Nicole's arrival in London was funny. You write Draco perfectly. Great chapter, Pru

Author's Response: thank you very much, Pru!

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Review #4, by Prudence Prior

Chapter One

3rd July 2005:

This is a wonderful beginning and a very well written chapter. :---)Pru

Author's Response: thanks very much! I'm glad you found the chapters! haha, i dont care about all the emails! thanks for the review!

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