Wow. That was amazing. This was by far one of the best Pettigrew stories I have ever read. It seemed so realistic and explained why he chose the dark side. It must take a brave lion to chose dark over good. I loved the way you intertwined your tale with the classic one of Poe. So thought out and so mesmerizing, they fit together like a glove. Outstanding job on telling the tale from the evil point of view. It truly makes the reader understand Peter's choices. I also love how you go from his Hogwarts day's all the way up to the trio's days. Awesome.
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That was beautifully written, all the descriptions of people at the beginning were amazing! Report Review
that's really the only word that can describe my utter amazement at the sheer brilliance of this fic!
kbavAuthor's Response: thank you :) Report Review
Awesome! Totally effective. I loved the weaving in and out of The Tell-Tale Heart, it made it even more spooky. And the voices, and the way you go through and explain everything--very well done! I have a story where Peter goes crazy, too, and if I'm not mistaken you made the banner for it? :) But maybe not. This whole piece was excellent. You made it very believable in a way, and I liked the stylized language. Nice job.Author's Response: ahh yes, I remember you! I did make that banner :) peter is a fun character to write, but a very difficult one so I'm glad that, coming from a fellow peter writer, you thought this was good :) thanks so much for reviewing! Report Review
personally, I am totally in love with Poe. His works are absolutley incredible and this story was just plain entertaining. I loved it. I've never seen something like this and the way you formulated the two stories to entwine together was brilliant. Thankyou sincerely for the marvelous read. ~ElspethAuthor's Response: Thank you for the lovely review. I've read some doozies in the past few minutes (trying to catch up) and it's nice to get a coherent one. Thanks again! Report Review
.................*stunned silence*.................. you rock............how could anyone say it sucks?Author's Response: thank you :) Report Review
Such a wonderfully written story! The detail is perfect, I love the poem also. We're going to see it in a play now that I think about it...Anyway, just amazing! I love your writing from Peter's perspective, it's...different!Author's Response: "Different" is what I was aiming for :) thank you for taking the time to review, I appreciate it! Report Review
There's nothing I can add to the numerous and effusive reviews that have gone before this one. I can only say that this was an absolute cracker and that you've managed to create something here which will continue to garner praise and admiration for a long, long time to come. That's just about the highest praise that any writer can hope for. Thanks for a good read!Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review! That really has made me so happy, I'm so thrilled that you enjoyed it. Report Review
Wow...... Amazing story! My favorite part was Peter's rant about Lily. That was definetly one of the best descriptions of Lily I've ever read. The emotion, the angst you put into this fic was astounding! Shivers actually ran down my spine as I read this. Your descriptions of the Marauders from Peter's pov was amazingly realistic and uncannily canon. The use of 'The tell-tale heart' was well used and appropriote. Chilly and surreal, this fic most definetly deserves a 10/10!Author's Response: Wow, I am speechless. Thank you so much for the thoughtful review! I'm thrilled that you thought so much of it. Thank you ^_^ Report Review
Wow... Wow... Wow...That was amazing. Excellent. You did a great job with the emotion.Wow... I really don't know what to say. I've never read anything like that. Wow...Author's Response: Wow, thank you. :) Report Review
I first read this story ages ago and when I came across it recently, I couldn't forget it again so I added it to my favorites immediatly. I myself have not read much of EAP's work, but I do think he is a fascinating and incomparable poet, and I must say that your writing fell in exeptionally well with his own. If not for the bolded text, I'm not sure I could decipher the difference. It truly does sound like a man on the edges of madness. By far one of my most favorite stories.Author's Response: Wow, that review has made my day. Thank you so much; it means a lot to me that you think it flows together well. It was very difficult to write, so knowing that it worked really makes me happy. Thank you for reviewing! Report Review
THis explains peter perfectly and is amazingly written
good job :DAuthor's Response: Thank you! That was my aim :) Report Review
Wow that was absolutely brilliant. You really captured Poe's style of writing and everything flowed together perfectly. I am most definately adding this one to my favorites =)Author's Response: Wow, thank you :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it that much! Report Review
Your style is incredible. This is a beautiful piece of work. Very convincing and dramatic! I've never read something that explored this aspect of Peter before, it's so original! Fantastic job!!!!Author's Response: Wow, thank you :) You've made me blush. I really wanted to give Peter some reasoning, to try and pick his brain. I'm glad it came across well :) thanks for reviewing! Report Review
A great story, cleverly and delicately written.
This Should be published....
Author's Response: haha, yeah, then I could really rip off Poe :) thank you, though, that's really very sweet. Report Review
I LOVE THIS STORY!! I loved the tell-tale heart, so when I saw this, I HAD to read it. I like how you put a new spin on the story, because I never would have guessed that Wormtail really hated James. I'm putting this on my favorites list, because I know I'm going to want to read it again...and again...
=] Good job!Author's Response: Haha, brilliant, I love it when people re-read my stories! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, thank you for the review ^_^ Report Review
That was SO GOOD! That...wow....that was just GREAT! Keep up the good work! :DAuthor's Response: Thank you, I'll try ^_^ Report Review
Brilliant stuff! I will admit to being a Poe fan, but it's great to see something genuinely original for once.
Great stuff!Author's Response: Aw thank you, that's so sweet ^_^ Report Review
"I Apparated to safety - London Centre, no sane nemesis would follow me to a Muggle town.
And no sane nemesis did. " This is truly a wonderful story, that line made me laugh, even though this whole thing was pretty deep. I almost thought I WAS reading Poe for a moment or two. Really great! Author's Response: Hahaha, thank you, I had completely forgotten that line. It was a bit of a heavy story so I tried to inject random funny bits to break it up. Thanks so much for reviewing :) Report Review
Wow. Wonderful. That was very well written. Wow.
Well, Hmm... Hair!?! I never expected that. haha but appropriate, I suppose. Great job!!!Author's Response: Well, since in Poe's story, it was the old man's eye that drove him to murder, I had to pick something about James to make Peter irrationally angry. Hair seemed a good choice :) thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Wow. I've read the original EAP poem and you really captured the spirit. Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you think so! Report Review
I have read better imitations but I can see why this is on the favorites list. Quite good all in all. Though, the transision between your own script and Poe did lose something in translation somewhere. For me at least. Author's Response: Well, I'm sorry to hear that, but thank you for taking the time to review. Report Review
Quite an intriguing read... I, as a big fan of Poe, must say, this is marvellously done. The author captured the essence of Poe's frantic pace quite nicely.Author's Response: It means a lot to me when someone who has read Poe likes this piece. Thank you so much for the review! Report Review
This is a masterful glance inside Peter's mind. Excellent job, both with your language and intertwining of Poe's writings! Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate that ^__^ Report Review
wow. great story. i've read tell-tale heart in class, and i think this version is MUCH more better. lol. they way you incorporated the story into the world of peter pettigrew...its just perfect. and the last line was such a great ending to this one-shot. definitely a favorite.
citoazn159Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm always doing this with school work, encorporating it into HP, it makes it so much easier to learn! lol, thanks for the review ^__^ Report Review
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