{reviewid: 701776, reviewer: 'James%20Deacon'}
20th September 2005:
It is a really nice one but I find a lot of people start off the story really nicely and then all of a sudden Hermione or harry says " I love you" which is nice but I wish it waqs just padded out a bit more. P.S. plz read my fanfic We Stand United its in Action\Adventure but it tottaly nudges towards H\Hr.........I man a big nudge
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{reviewid: 598380, reviewer: 'Bozzy'}
17th July 2005:
well..it made me laugh...but it was good
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{reviewid: 590047, reviewer: 'harry_potter_girl091'}
11th July 2005:
thats a good story! i kno i already reviewed it under a different name but u dont have many reviews so im reviewing it again. its good, i think u should write another one!
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{reviewid: 571282, reviewer: 'biggie'}
30th June 2005:
wow that was short inyet very sweet good job!
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{reviewid: 570763, reviewer: 'vampire_hunter_lover'}
29th June 2005:
really really cheesy.
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{reviewid: 570537, reviewer: 'lp'}
29th June 2005:
Great Story
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{reviewid: 569590, reviewer: 'oxoD%20r%20e%20amoxo'}
29th June 2005:
thats a great story! i cant believe u thought ppl wouldnt like it! its good....keep writing fanfiction.
Author's Response: thanx!! i'll keep writing
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{reviewid: 569237, reviewer: 'tommyisdabomb'}
29th June 2005:
Wow good story.
Author's Response: thanx!
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