This was beautiful. I wish there was more to it but I checked the Prequel and you haven't updated in a while. I don't want to get hooked, only to find out you're going to abandon it or something ! :O hahah.
But, on its own even, this was amazing. I loved Harry's daughter, she's so adorable (even though I've barely seen anything of her- that's how wonderful your writing is). Report Review
that was so sad i was crying so bad it was a great chapter keep writing Report Review
It's so sad!! It's a big tear-jerker! I was crying during the middle, and then when she said that thing about seeing him, I was basically sobbing! *I'm a big baby* I can't wait to read the next chapter in Baby, either! Wicked, Ace story!
Im bawling my eyes out, literaly. That was so sad. Not convincing that the child was in first grade, but still so sad. 9/11 huh? I loved that video. I just finished reading a story about it. Maybe thats why im literaly crying. Report Review
oh this is so sad! i loved it! Report Review
that's pretty great. sad. Report Review
i was BAWLING by the end of this.it was soo good! Report Review
OMG it made me cry
this was so sad *tears*...I just recently saw the 9/11 video, it truly does inspire, after I saw it, I ended up writing the sadest short story in my life, not for HPFF, but for school. Well great job...I need to read the story that goes with this though...I want to know what happened to Harry... Report Review
aww... this is so sad, fantastic writing, and u made me cry! Report Review
Okay, I cried! But that's probably because it's kind of like the story with me and my daddy...
but anyway, it's really great! Report Review
harry is dead that is horrible. i wish u hahnt killed him off Report Review
My father died when I was five. Just old enough for me to have a memory or two and miss him, but too young to truly know and remember him. It's been eleven years... I don't cry often, but this story made my eyes glaze over. It's touching, so sweet. I'm glad I stubbled upon it^^ Report Review
You know what .. I watched the 9/11 video a few minutes ago, and I accidentaly came over this ..
IT WAS SO SAD! OMG! I'm crying like a maniac here, and I feel stupid because of it .... I don't know what to say, it was so beautiful and so ... SAAAD! :'( Report Review
That was...awsome!! Really sad. Definately one of my favorites! 10/10! =) Report Review
It was very good. I read this becuase of the "Make Me Cry" challenge- but it didn't make me cry. Good job though. Report Review
Ohh, this is so sad. I love that video. I cry almost every time I watch it. This was sucha great story, keep on writing! Report Review
Wow. I loved it. I am now forced to go read the prequel and your other stories. 93820983109830291803191237391803321337982719837983/10. Report Review
Aw that's sad! It was really good. I'm gonna read the prequel right nowAuthor's Response: I hope you enjoy it! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
I love this story..Author's Response: Gracias, i'm glad you liked it! Report Review
That was so sad! im gonna read the prequelAuthor's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the one-shot. Enjoy the prequel! Thanks, hun! Report Review
i love this it's great, i'm crying, awww i'm gunna go read the prequel now,
well done this is greatAuthor's Response: Aw thank you, i'm glad you liked it! Report Review
oh my god, i'm totally crying. I am such a loser. lol. great story, it's brillant, it could not be better. This is so beautiful. So well done, so wonderful!!! you should be so proud, this is one terrific one-shot... so brillant and beautiful. I love it, this is definitely a favorite, without a doubt. I'm gonna check your others stories, and if they're as good as this, which they probably are, you are one terrific writer. Great job!!! I'm so jealous, i wish i wrote it, lol. Awesome!!! i can not say that enough. lol :) definitely a 9.Author's Response: Oh don't worry. I cry when I read sad one-shots, so no worries. I'm right there with you. I hope you enjoy my other stories! And you shouldn't be jealous, my writting is not all that good, but i'm flattered all the same. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Awww. That was really sad, but i liked it. Its a very good story! Can't wait to read the prequel! I'll be sure 2 check out your other fics!Author's Response: The prequel is already up it's called Baby Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Oh my God!!!!!!!!!!! What a lovely story! I was so touched I can't believe it! Amazing, it's all I can sayAuthor's Response: Thank you! Report Review
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